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| Ghostwriter 2008-06-17 ch 12,  | abuseGood job. Catch ya on the flip side. |
| Ghostwriter 2008-06-16 ch 11, | abuseAwesome job. Catch ya on the flip side. |
| Twinmom 2008-06-16 ch 9, | abuseWas really enjoying the story until Penhall and Booker became a couple. I really liked the idea of the letters, but a slash warning would have been VERY much appreciated. I dont like to read slash about characters when that's not how they were presented in the shows or movies. Otherwise, I've enjoyed reading. |
| firebunee 2008-06-10 ch 9, | abusePlease sir... may I have some more... |
| Spyder Webb 2008-06-09 ch 9, | abuseI just stumbled upon this. Very nice and very real. Though I've never pictured a Tom/Doug/Dennis relationship. O.o interesting choice. I love how Hanson's mom suggests it. XD |
| procol harum 2008-06-08 ch 9, | abuseAh, the mystery of Tom's attitude is finally solved, and fried octupus? That's mean and sounds disgusting :( |
| Ghostwriter 2008-06-08 ch 9, | abuseAwesome job. Catch ya on the flip side. |
| Nikki (random insights) 2008-06-07 ch 8, anon. | abuseha ha I liked this, and aw for Roses... this is amusing, though. And yeah, I liked the dyslexix cow thing lol. And poor Tom doesn't want them knowing just how much of a geek he was. Ah, only kids with good grades get free bowling? That seems kinda unfair, although I don't think the 'troubled' ones with bad grades would wanna spend their time bowling anyways lol. Okay, uhm, I don't get the double negative thing, I think it killed my brain a little :S |
| firebunee 2008-06-05 ch 7, | abuseThank you, Thank you, Thank you! No one has ever written anythin for me before. (well, my hubby wrote his vows, which he probably could not remember if he tried) This was great and by the way, I am dyslexic! That made me laugh so hard! I loved it! This was a great idea, I am waiting for more:-) Your the bestest |
| firebunee 2008-06-05 ch 6, | abuseAH! I hate Tommy-abusers! It’s kinda funny though, I’m getting this picture that people actually like it. Have you ever thought that maybe our lives are like an open book to others? They can like open it whenever and take pleasure at the hurting? (I resemble that remark!) That was great! You are cracking me up right now! |
| firebunee 2008-06-05 ch 5, | abuseSo loved Bookers letter!LOL! |
| tewksgirl 2008-06-04 ch 7, | abuseI'm just loving the attitude that shows up in these letters! You make Hanson's mom sound like a cool, fun spirited mother too! Keep up the great work on this unique idea! |
| procol harum 2008-06-04 ch 7, | abuseHa ha I loved the dyslxic cow part... Good chapter, I loved Booker's response(and Tom isn't that scarwny cough cough) but who wouldn't want him? I think that Dennis is just lying... And of course, I alway love Doug's response :D Pretty cool how you've gotten this far with a story being set through just letters =) |
| procol harum 2008-06-03 ch 6, | abuseHa ha, I loved Tom's response to Booker, and then the beginning of his response to Doug lol. And of course he'd hurt anywaone who hurt Doug =) And ah, okay, I get the croak thing now lol |
| tewksgirl 2008-06-03 ch 5, | abuseThanks so much for the dedication! Wow...you just made my day! Wonderful chapter once again... I love how Booker can get Tom riled up, even when he's in prison! To think that he'd put a freakin refrence in there about him and Doug! I always loved the tension between Hanson/ Booker. |