|Reviews for Pivot: Part II of The Concurrence Arc|
| syrraki 8/5/08 . chapter 1
YAy! I didn't think you were going to write part II which would have sucked cause i loved part one. Brilliant, by the way, really realistic :)
| Bookie-Sensei 7/7/08 . chapter 1
Yatta! That was fantasic! great job!
| charmpit 6/18/08 . chapter 1
You made us all wait a long-assed time for this update. But you know what? It was worth every day of the wait.
You are good, and you know it.
| shirilyle 6/17/08 . chapter 1
that was soo sweet
| Phantomsnow 6/16/08 . chapter 1
that was hot! Poor Sasuke he felt so bad afterwards.
| michelerene 6/16/08 . chapter 1
It is my personal opinion that you are a miracle worker. I don't even have the words to explain how amazing this was. I adore the first part... adore it and so when I saw this one, I squealed like a little girl and I'm not embarrassed to admit that. And then I started reading it and god, between bittersweet smiles, giggles, tears and a worrying amount of not breathing I found that the second one was just as good. No better.
You are brilliant. Thank you.
| Mrs Hatake Itachi 6/16/08 . chapter 1
| tad 6/12/08 . chapter 1
oh very nice - policeman naruto - oh the thought
| giganemo 6/10/08 . chapter 1
This is really well written! Very enjoyable... and hot ;)
| Suzaku 6/8/08 . chapter 1
Hey Eris! It's been a l0ng time..is'nt it? Haha..your story amazed me..as usual XP I've been waiting for so l0ng for this..and its..its..AMAZING! One of w0nderfull piece of your work..my st0ry (A Minute Of Love) is alm0st finish..I'll p0st it as s0on as I can..keep up the go0d w0rk.. :)d
| Arvi 6/6/08 . chapter 1
Great story! Even better than the first part.
| Pyro-Neko-Isis 6/5/08 . chapter 1
I love it
| Artificial Starlight 6/4/08 . chapter 1
Aw, this story was just adorable! So original and sweet. They were both in great character and I could see them in their profession perfectly. Awesome writing, definitely a favorite.
| kaesaku 6/4/08 . chapter 1
isn't that nice?
i can't wait for part I.. :)
| Everything In Its Right Place 6/3/08 . chapter 1
Amazing. Amazing. Amazing. I've been waiting for the next part of this arc for a long time, and let me say, you did not disappoint. Your story was well-written and beautiful. I absolutely loved it. I look forward to your next work.