Wow, very good that, but would she really do that? One could only hope she would.

You know what I liked best about this? That it manages to borrow things from canon ("limbo", the flayed, raw creature that Voldemort becomes, the veil...) and yet it is still original. Well, that and I thought you mastered the descriptive language. And, the symbolism in this is amazing - Bella's soul, scarred by the things she has done, and also the choice she has to make at the end. JKR said that anybody could be redeemed, except Voldemort, and I thought you really brought this idea to life.

Very nice. One of those little ditties that float from the ether, prod a brain, then settle down to wait until their chosen one releases them unto the world. M...it's like grapefruit juice, I think. Bitter, maybe, but also sweet, even if it's masked. It will quench your thirst as well as any water or soda, and sometimes, sometimes despite the tang, it's more pleasant than either.