omg...my heart literally started ACHING when i read this fanfic. It's so sweet! and i can really imagine this scene being in the movie (why didn't they include it??!) anyway, this is a really really well done fanfic argh I still can't believe those two won't end up together T.T

That was sweet; I could see Caspian and Susan acting that towards each other, acknowledging their affections for each other.


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Hehehe how cute!! :D I really enjoyed this. I felt all giggly like Susan!

I really enjoyed this story. Well written and truly captures the awkwardness of teenage romance. Well done.

Aw, that was so cute.

Wow, so cute! I love it so much...

It's so much fun to read about their adorable clumsiness.I was feeling so warm and fuzzy after this...

...and then I remembered their split afterwards.

*sigh*

Oh jeez! That was really cute! Great job!

this was a cute story.

it was funny that at the end that they kept coming up with things to say to linger in each other's presance.

aw! cute

Aww that was so cute and heartwarming at the same time. Just wish that you would somehow continue this.

Well, really cute :D, kind of ackward, but you worked that so well :) I really enjoyed it, I hope you write more soon :), be well and take care.

AW! That was adorable and cute and sweet and perfectly written! I loved it! It captured the awkwardness of the situation and still kept the characters in character, which makes the story believable. I could actually see something like this happening! Great job!

ohh wow!

that's just too adorable! amazing one-shot :D