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| MesT 2008-07-06 ch 1, | abuseHehehe how cute!! :D I really enjoyed this. I felt all giggly like Susan! |
| Politics.and.Prose 2008-06-12 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed this story. Well written and truly captures the awkwardness of teenage romance. Well done. |
| Broken Gold 2008-06-09 ch 1, | abuseAw, that was so cute. |
| Random.Gal930 2008-06-04 ch 1, | abuseWow, so cute! I love it so much... |
| maaike-fluffy 2008-06-03 ch 1, | abuseIt's so much fun to read about their adorable clumsiness.I was feeling so warm and fuzzy after this... ...and then I remembered their split afterwards. *sigh* |
| Draco Lover3 2008-06-03 ch 1, | abuseOh jeez! That was really cute! Great job! |
| mae-E 2008-06-02 ch 1, | abusethis was a cute story. it was funny that at the end that they kept coming up with things to say to linger in each other's presance. |
| Ghostwriter626 2008-06-02 ch 1, | abuseaw! cute |
| enchantdark 2008-06-02 ch 1, | abuseAww that was so cute and heartwarming at the same time. Just wish that you would somehow continue this. |
| Erin-21 2008-06-02 ch 1, | abuseWell, really cute :D, kind of ackward, but you worked that so well :) I really enjoyed it, I hope you write more soon :), be well and take care. |
| Aquamarine07 2008-06-02 ch 1, | abuseAW! That was adorable and cute and sweet and perfectly written! I loved it! It captured the awkwardness of the situation and still kept the characters in character, which makes the story believable. I could actually see something like this happening! Great job! |
| QueenSusanLovesKingCaspian1... 2008-06-02 ch 1, | abuseohh wow! |
| herbieunloaded 2008-06-02 ch 1, | abusethat's just too adorable! amazing one-shot :D |
| Naomi Friesen 2008-06-02 ch 1, | abuseaw so sweet! |
| Shining Friendship 2008-06-02 ch 1, | abuseOh, that was THE cutest one-shot between Suspian! Aw! They were just adorable together in your story. I hope you write another one soon! |