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watupitROSALIE
2008-08-29
ch 5,
abusethat story u got the idea from wasnt good it was GREAT! the best fanfiction iv ever read! i'm not gonna im nina until i get a proper sn.
Pyrodragon8292
2008-08-17
ch 3,
abuseAmi is AWESOME! my fave char.
Perfect love kills all fear
2008-07-27
ch 4,
abuseThat's ok, I live in lower Wisconsin and I can't wait to get the book too. Well I hope you get the book and it helps you writting the story.

sakuraxcherryxblossm
Belle95
2008-07-27
ch 3,
abuseAwesome chapter. I love this story...Belle
Belle95
2008-07-27
ch 2,
abusethis was another really cool chapter. I love it...Belle
Belle95
2008-07-27
ch 1,
abuseThis sounds like a good story. I can't wait until you write more...Belle
wolfygirl58
2008-07-27
ch 3,
abuseWow, I love your story! I think the third chapter is better than the other two, the diary form is quite good at the beginning though. It's really good and Seth is totally my favourite character in the twilight series. He's soo sweet =)
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write the next chapter soon, I really want to know what happens next =) If you want you can even mention me ;) ha you dont have to. I've added your story as a favourite and all that, can't wait for the next chapter!!
GWTW4ever
2008-07-17
ch 3,
abusethis is a great story! ur a great author! i noticed this story because of ur penname. good thing i did 2! do u love love love GWTW as much as i do?!
watupitROSALIE
2008-07-14
ch 3,
abusegood chapter. but not a supprise. i got a sneak peek. u should name ur stories after evanescence songs like krystalcullen names her stories after H.I.M. songs.
Perfect love kills all fear
2008-07-13
ch 3,
abuseGreat chapter. sorry I didn't review sooner. I was sorta grounded off the computer and I just got back. Anyways like I said before. I really love how this is going and I can't wait until the next update.

P.S. Hey reviewing later might be good. Then I don't have to wait as long for and update. Whatever, as soon as you update if I am on I will review.

sakuraxcherryxblossom
Iluvfictionalboyz
2008-07-12
ch 3,
abuseomg love this story!
it's so sad about that john guy..almost cried:P
but the promise in this story...love it!
anyways keep updating!
~Shana!
Perfect love kills all fear
2008-07-11
ch 2,
abuseoh, god you have got to update. You are cruel. you said you might update the next day and I don't see an update. Please update soo. I really love your story so far and please write longer chapter if it is not too much to ask?

I gave you two sort of long reviews and that is all that I can give you unless I review anomonesly (sorry can't spell) which I think you would rather have different reviewers and not the same one so please update soon.

With this diary entry it says that her sister liked Seth enough to ask him out and he said no and imprinting on her twin sister must be sort of awkward when it comes to them dating. Won't Ami feel sort of betrayed even though it didn't seem like she took it bad?

Needless to say I added your story to my favorites list.

sakuraxcherryxblossom (I usually write my name thingy at the end of a review but I don't know why I didn't do that when I reviewed for chapter one)
Perfect love kills all fear
2008-07-11
ch 1,
abuseYes it was sort of short now that you mention it. But it was pretty good so far.

That's going to be intresting when Seth imprints on her with her sister dateing one of them. Was her sister imprinted on too or is it just regular dating?

I guess you like the beetles.
IcyScorpio
2008-07-06
ch 2,
abuseThis was really good.
I can't wait till Seth imprints on her. :D
Lycaon118
2008-07-04
ch 2,
abuseOh thank goodness an update! My e-mail cleaned out all of my files so I lost your pen-name and had no one to talk to who remotely understood how important Seth is! I've been going crazy!

Great chapter btw
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