De Nam being my favourite character in the whole game, you pulled off this writing piece nicely. His background was built well and it was great to see a piece of his life. I always thought De Nam turned into a monster himself, that's why you get the bandanna when you kill a random monster. Anyways, the numbering system is great, and the insight into his wish of understanding his own race more was well written. Great piece.

You know, it's probably the fact that so little is known about De Nam that we fanfic writers appreciate his story--we can take a lot of artistic license, just as long as we stick to the basics of his ambition and the circumstances that surround his untimely death in Conall Curach.

Good work. What else can I say, really?

A very well-written piece that could've been integrated into the game itself in explaining De Nam's origins. For someone who doesn't own the game, your writing hints at close familiarity (or, more appropriately, significant research/intuition).

~ suki9870 ~