love it

Nice. sad ending. good job.

really good

congrats on making me cry...

i was actually listening to Bella's lullaby when i read this...

i was crying especially at the end...

If Alice and Bella were too late to rescue Edward, the Twilight series would be a better read
I love your Bella/Carlisle stories. Kudos to you.

That was so sad! Congrats on making me tear up :P

I love all of these one-shots. They're amazing. Keep it up!

Sam.

well, that was amazing...I always thought Carlisle secretly lusted after Bella. Very turned on...hmm, ur good! off to read the sequel...:)

Great Story! I Love All The One's You"ve Written So Far... But I hate Edward for Leaving!

damn carlisle! i love him!

jordan

thats so sad i hate the dapressingness of it

I HAVE LOVED EVERY STORY THAT YOU HAVE WRITTEN SO FAR AND HOPE THAT YOU UPDATE THIS ONE SOON

Love it! Very well written. Poor Bella and Carlisle... Edward is gone *cries*

This story was very sad, but I liked it a lot. I do have a question, though. Was Edward's note to Carlisle that Bella found mean that he had romantic feelings for him, or that he loved him as a father and friend?

DiamondSkin

You're lemons make for one hell of a story, but it's also the love and romance that make it soo good.
Keep makin'em. They're the best.-Jennifer.

aw, so sad! do you know about my contest? it's about non-traditional couples. you could use a story you already have or write a new one. message me if you want to participate. sorry for advertising in a review, but i need more stories! loved this one by the way!

bitten91