VERY god poem. this poem is really good. drugs can destroy people so horibbly, ruin their lives more then they expect, and i won't give in. i hope you write the story to go with it soon!
ja ne!

*sniff sniff* It's sooo sad! You should write the story! It would make a good Lina or Amelia fic. I know I'm a little obsessed with Lina, but actually I really don't like Amelia. But it would still make a good Amelia fic. Another good fic would be if Amelia got cancer...but I don't know if someone's already done that. If no one has, I might...or you might...all depends!

Yow, that's powerful. Love it. I'm as curious as the rest-who exactly is this about? And as morbid as it sounds, I'd love to see a fic to go with this poem (Assuming there's not one already ).

wow... you used some pretty strong words... exactly who was this meant for anyway? please apease my curiosity (i'm very curious by nature... so sue me...)... usually i don't review poetry (for the sheer fear of saying something wrong) but i couldn't resist reviewing this...

Wonderful imagery, great writing. I like! I like!

Very very powerful...and true, really. It's talking about Lina isn't it? Well I liked it _. A story with this would be nice.

Now I'm curious. Who was this? Y'know, I noticed that poetry gets the least reviews on this section of . No one seems to read the one I put up...oh well. I guess i won't put up poetry here again. Who were you planning to subject to this descent into hell, just out of sheer undying curiousity?