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Bitter Failure
2008-07-05 . chapter 3
That's certainly got to be a huge blow to Azula's ego that they won't let her in D: And sucks that she's trying to entice them but it doesn't work. It's a major embarrasment ;__; God knows I've been through that.

But Mai and Ty Lee are really cute together here. Nice story ^^
AvatarAiris
2008-06-08 . chapter 4
hehe, interesting
chap, i like that Azula
decided to go after Jun
for a follower ;) it seems
as though they could work very
well together ;P
AvatarAiris
2008-06-07 . chapter 3
nice pairing and
POV choice ;)
especailly with Azula
wanting to be apart of
Ty Lee and Mai's
relationship ^_~
AvatarAiris
2008-06-05 . chapter 2
yay, you're continuing
it ^^ and this chap
was really good :D
seriously, i love your
Kana POV, i think you
hit her old self dead
center ^_^
AvatarAiris
2008-06-03 . chapter 1
interesting short one-shot
for Ursa/Ming, never thought
of the pairing but i like how
you wrote about in this ;)
a little short, but nice work ^^
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