Ah. Excellent. I always like a strong likeable Lureen in a story as I found her character in the movie so likeable. Avery interesting angle to bring Donal and Tim into the story.

Well done!

Hey there!

I had somehow missed this story until now...wow what a ride! Poor Jack! And what a shock for everyone who loved him to find out that he is still alive. A great story, thanks!!

Jen

Squee! They're together at last!

Wo!

new story :D i luv it... felt like the plot was great but you coould have made the end longer, loved it but it felt slightly rushed...

but yea any story form u make me smile :D

keep writing xx.

as usual great story. I only wished we had more of the Jack and Ennis reunion. That Dr. Peterson sounds like a horrible person. Keeping people against their will like that.