I like this, although its a bit morbid but I think in the end the birth of their child or children could be a bond that could bind them closer, ne?? Too bad neither tried harder enough to fix what is wrong between them or else they wouldn't have to live in such regret...wish to have a sequel for this one though...

Nice fic btw...

oh this really is morbid! Wails...
but it was good.

Poor, poor Hinata. What had you make such a story that was so gasply(sp?) yet so unique?

Finally a Hinata/Neji that has neither of the two are incest crazed.

Oh my, this was quite powerfully written. Well done indeed.

I don't really know, what to write about this.

It's well written and so on.
It somehow reminded me, of a comment I once read which was posted on some Nejihina-rape-fic: "This is the dark side of Nejihina." I disagreed with the comment at all. But it'd fit for your story... this is the REAL dark side about Nejihina.

Though... it seems for me to be a bit too dark right now... but who am I, to critisize that, since this your work met the intention you had? :)

That's so sad, it was very well writen, and so sad, but thats what i liked, you gave alot of good detail about their feelings, feeling that are so true to the character, unlike many M rated stories you didnt change their personality around. again, great story!

That was such a powerful writing. It really makes you feel for them. Stories like this and writers like you make NejiHina worthwhile.

I had to read this. Even if I am far behind on reading.
I loved the feelings and emotion bred into this. I could feel it all, the degrading shameful feeling. You wrote it so well.

And how pain was used to cover a multitude of topics in this situation.

I'm all over the place in Naruto so I have read for this pairing; but you've quenched my thirst in looking for something interesting and well done within it.

Well done :) I really liked this and I'm not a fan of this pairing. Great job of capturing the mood and their feelings in such an economy of words!