Im speechless that was awesome
thiers not many writers who make the main chacters be the bad guy and not all good and crap please keep it up
Im waiting for the next chappy

I love this Lavi. It's so perfectly evil it makes me giggle on the inside like a young girl who got kissed on the cheek by a young boy at the amusement park after giving him her cookie. Yeah, I trailed off. I'm still interested.

*whistle*
Whoa.
Dark, and different but not really OOC... And so well written, too.
The idea of Lavi against Lenalee is not one I would have thought of, but it is certainly interesting. And a genius Kanda? x)
I was so disapointed when I saw there were only two chapters XD
Hope you update soon!

*twitch*
*twitch twitch*
...BAKA LAVI!
GAH I HATE YOU LAVI
too late
i hate him i hate him i hate him
FUDGE!
arghh...how could he do that to lenalee?
LAVI BETTER HAVE IT COMING.
i want to see him die. (maybe not literally but...yea you get what i mean)
ALLEN WALKER APPEARS!?
YES!
YES YES YES!
maybe he'll be able to take down the lavi montrosity that currently exists!
*growl* i have nothing against kanda though...BUT WHY...WHY WHY WHY did kanda have to get together with lavi!?
*moans*
wow. i think this review just ranked the second most screwiest that i've ever written.

wow, I love this xD Lavi is awesome! Cool to see he's the bad guy, no more like the predator, in this, a great twist on the usual. I'd like to see Kanda with a more active role though, although it already seems to me that he might be the key to Lavi's downfall if Lenalee besides to play dirty. Can't wait to see how Lenalee will retaliate, and how Allen will mix things up ;)

Wow. That was... pretty darn jawdropping. D8
And I definitely mean that in a good way.

I just love this. Too much. I love how you molded the characters, keeping them to their personalities, yet giving them their own flair for this particular AU. Lavi's analytical and manipulative side is just entirely too intriguing. Kanda is totally in character, and I thought his personality truly shined during the kendo/fencing fight. His reactions were impressively IC. I've been struggling lately with fic ideas, as I have trouble thinking of ways to keep everyone IC, but reading this was really aweinspiring. Lavi and Kanda aren't portrayed exactly like they are in canon, but the way you wrote them out was just too great to even consider them OOC. Your writing style itself is a wonder -- the story just seems so enigmatic the way you write it.

I really am curious to see how they toy with Lenalee in particular. It makes me wonder whether they'll defeat her... or if she'll defeat them. She is a strong girl, after all. I'm really looking forward to future chapters, no matter how long it takes. Sorry for the lack of constructive criticism. XD;;

Seriously, keep up the amazing work. I'll be rooting you on!

Seems interesting–and a bit dark too. I like it ;P
interested in where you're going with it^^

THis is certainly something new. I have never seen Lavi portrayed so darkly but I must say, I find it almost addicting. You absolutely HAVE to continue this brilliant story. Just one little glitch, and to say the truth, never in any of my reviews have I ever given any criticism, but this story is just too good not to be perfect.

The last part, where I think it goes back in time, right? You should make it a bit more obvious that they have, or else readers would be confused.

Update fast - this is the best AU I have read so far. Or maybe even the best LaviYuu. I'll see.

This is awesome!~

Its a way different way to viewing the characters in a completely different setting, yet the characters remain to themselves. It's wonderful and I look forward to reading the rest of it.

YES! laviXkanda AU luv you

wow pretty interesting. You made Rabi such a dark character... i like it :) although greed really doesn't suit him, i think he search for something deeper, money is too simple for this complex character XD But I like where you are going with this~ Looking for more now~

Kuro

It's really interesting so far. I don't mind if it takes you long to update, just as long as ya do. You're good.

Interesting. I've never read a fic written this way before, and the uniqueness is appreciated. RK all the way! Definitely continue this story!