I'm sorry for the late review! I really should take the time to clear my E-mail box sometimes, shouldn't I? ^^;; Anyway, I liked these two chapters. Didn't notice any mistakes, or anything that needed to be pointed out, so no constructive critism for now.

I wasn't expecting that ending. XD

Nice job on Adrian's dream. The emotion was powerful, and the way you introduced her power was magnificent. While talking her power, I'll also point out that it's very original. =)

With that said, I can't wait until your next chapter. ^^

Hey!

Nice chapter again. I'm heading onto the next chapter right now, and getting ready to leave a longer review! ^__^

A little short, but its cool. ^_^ Continue soon.

Nice story. I'm working on one too. Check it out when you have time.

Nice again! No constructive critism, so all I can say is that this chapter was also brilliantly written! =) Can't wait until your next update!

Hey!

Again, great chapter. Due to having no constructive crit., I have nothing else to say really. ^__^;;

Hey!

Nice and powerful way to start off with. The vocabulary was strong, which in any case only drew the reader in faster. I do have one more question before I jump to the minor constructive critism: what animes are you using? I'm mostly just asking out of curiosity.

For my constructive crit., I'm just pointing out minor mistakes, since everything else is fine.

[“better than any police force, that’s for sure.”] I'm pretty sure you know I'm just pointing out that "better" should be capitalized.

[“yes, there’s an unconscious body here….”] Again, I'm just pointing out that "yes" needs to be capitalized.

That's all! =D

~Sakra-chan