it was nice, very nice from the begining but when you started the crossover with ST Voyager it went down, as if you lacked the ideas.

Well, interesting story, I liked the way you didn't waste time in getting our favourite couple started (unlike the show)! I do, however, have some grumbles. Your grammar, in parts, could use some work. Also you have a tendency to repeat things, eg you broke the news about Dianne and Winston's engagement twice to the same people. Also (sorry!) the dialogue in some places sounds like the descriptive part of the story and not like a young character talking.
You did do Neri's talk very well, and I especially liked the first part when she came back from the migration-that was beautifully written. The Ubri rescue was too easy, though, and I think you could have focused more on the younger ones almost getting caught to add some excitement, a la the original series. Other than that, good fic and hope to see more from you. Love,

Lase.

can u plz hurry up and and update it's drivin me crazy
i pretty much only read ur shit

keep ritin

I'm upset that Neri and Jason are in wheel chairs and you should make it that their relationship is more known you would think they're just friends but theres more than that they love each other and you should try and make that more obvous from jess

I'm upset that Neri and Jason are in wheel chairs and you should make it that their relationship is more known you would think they're just friends but theres more than that they love each other and you should try and make that more obvous from jess

I'm upset that Neri and Jason are in wheel chairs and you should make it that their relationship is more known you would think they're just friends but theres more than that they love each other and you should try and make that more obvous from jess

I enjoied this. It really entraining, and It's well written. Bravo to you!

Ocean Girl meets Star Trek Voyager. -blinks twice out of surprise- I didn't exspect that at ALL, funny thing is I like this story. update asap OK?-The wonderful Candy Andy-

I used to watch thios show and this fic is really good. I would love to read more of it. You made it seem so real, almost as if it had actually happened on the show. Great job.

with exception to a few rather outlandish things (ie diane and winston marrying and jason going with neri on migration) it's pretty good so far. I can't honestly say there wasn't a time i had some similar ideas.)