I don't know if you've given up on this story or not- I mean, it's kind of been a while since you updated it, yeah?- but, regardless, it still made me laugh. Zack, especially. I miss him. :P So IF you feel so inclined, by all means, feel free to keep posting chapters. They will be read! :)

Zack was looking at her like Christmas had come early – it was a little unnerving. “Can I adopt you?” he asked, grabbing her hand and trapping it between both of his. “Or at least be your honorary big brother?”

Yuffie punched him in the chest. “Stop hitting on her!”

LOL! I love Zack and Cloud. Zack is my favorite FF7 character. So yay, the man's not dead! And Cloud doesn't sound all emo, woot! I love the whole war idea and things! Ether addicts...hm...interesting...instead of the cokeheads that are in our world.

Anyways, awesome chapter, and I'm looking foward to the rest!

Wow. This intrigued the hell out of me (pardon my awful mouth-- Yuffie must be rubbing off on me). I love that it's Roxiri (whoo!), so that caught me right away, but what really made me squee and giggle and need to have the next chapter of this? The fact that you have Zack being alive, and he's being as awfully cute as Zack always is. =D I mean, I *love* Zack, I adore him, he is the balance to Cloud. Who I also adore.
Roxas being the smartass bad guy made me giggle too; I really cannot wait to get to when they meet everyone from the refugees (lol, first picture that popped into my head: Zack and Cloud barging up to them and giving them the "you hurt my friends I will murder you in your sleep, bring you back to life and do it again" speech). XD Excuse my randomness; it's one thirty in the morning and I'm punch drunk, so I promise that other reviews will be more comprehensive at another time. :D

Once again, this is great. You've managed to nail most of the characters.(I can't speak for Zack) This is pretty epic, please continue.

I love this story so much. The concept is epic, and the characterizations are spot on, and what else is there to possibly say except that you are made of win and awesome?

Well, a lot more, actually. >_> I've read some of your other stories, and I've always enjoyed how you handle the interaction between Kairi and Axel, so I can't wait to see how you write Roxas and Kairi. At any rate, the dialogue is very smooth, and the way you handle the war is absolutely wonderful. It's not melodramatic or a joke. There are class distinctions and refugees and people suffering and people holding on, and long story short: I adore the details.

We would be here all day if I tried to list out all the quotes that made me smile. Suffice to say, Axel is brilliantly witty and Yuffie is mischievous but not on crack, and I don't even know Zack that well, but I love him already. The way you plotted and sectioned off this chapter was also really effective at creating suspense but logical at the same time.

I hope you find time to add more, because everything is so shiny and perfect and full of potential right now. Best of luck.

that was incredable, it's been a very long time since i've seen a good story on Roxas and Kairi, since then i've only ever read ones by Shiro on them, and this is saying something, i feel like i can so get into this and they all appear to be in character as well which is great :3

the idea is also awesome as well, i love it when authors break away from the kh plot and create something new and that you've done :3 i'm just excited to see hwat will happen when Roxas and Kairi meet and how everything will turn out.

Yuffie is a laugh, and Zack made me giggle with how he kept flirting with Kairi, and Roxas, Axel and Demyx rock in battle even if they get beaten up but yeah XD

continue on with your brillent work sis it's a master piece yesh x3 (adds story to favourites and puts it on alert)

awesome u so have to update soon! I read the same chapter like 6 times thats how much I like it! plez hurry!

hahaha, this plot is pretty interesting =D
yuffie & OMGITSZACK are just hilarious. yayz
i somehow cant picture roxas swearing like that

THIS IS SO GOD! Please continue this. I love it. I don't even have words to explain it's greatness. Update soon...pretty please!

OMG that was so awesome!! I loved it!! You have to finish it!! It was so awesome!! xD ^_^

Five reviews already? And you said no one would like it. xD But, poo on you, other reviewers, I so totally read this when it was being written and kinda helped with the ideas. B: So HA. I WIN.

I so wanted to review this before school but I wanted to read it again. xD But, ironically, I was talking about KHII with a friend and she hates Roxas/Namine as much as we do. xD When we started talkign about Namine, I said, "She's such a ** to Roxas. I hate her in KHII but loved her in CoM..." And she agreed and added that she doesn't understand how "You were never supposed to exist, Roxas." said in a happy tone to our poor beloved nobody could equal OMG THEY WANTS TO SEX EACH OTHER. [Heh~ I'd totally say, "You were never supposed to exist but not you do, just for me. =D" and then he'd prolly punch me. xD Cause I so wouldn't totally invade him, uhm. Personal space.] I'm glad I have a friend who dislikes the same pairings I do, but I didn't broach the subject of crack pairings yet. Dun wanna scare her off. B:

...Erm. Yeah. Review.

Well, you pretty much know how much i love this fic. x3 It really does cut off perfectly cause it seriously would have just been too long if you had kept going. xDD Your characters are amazing and I do feel like I know them. They all have separate personalties and I can somehow keep track of all of your characters. You're that brilliant of a writer. =3

Oh, and since this fic is totally shipping my second favorite pairing ever, it should so have at least hints of my favorite one, if you know what I mean. xD At the very least I think it'd be funny when they get to the Sora-sleep-talking scene [I know I read reviews so I dun wanna spoil anything for anyone else who does] maybe he could roll over in his sleep while they're arguing with Riku and Sora ends up slapping Yuffie's ** or something along those lines. xD That would make me so happy. [Well, you'd know what would make me happier but it's your story so that's up to you. B:]

And uhm.

ROXAS. YOU'RE TOTALLY HOT.

*shot*

Wow. I'm absolutely loving this fic! I can't wait for an update, this story is amazing! Bravo!

holy crap, I cannot even BEGIN to tell you how much I freaking love you. Honest. Just - guh.

YOU ARE A GENIUS. SRSLY. GRADE A, PURE F--CKING GENIUS.

as;dja;sljs;d.

alerts + favorites, yo.

OH MY EDWARD.

I love this.

It's like, a euphoria or friggin' awesomeness.

AND IT'S ROXIRI. My OTP.

he.


Your authors note made me laugh. haha.

I'm speechless here (either that, or I'm lazyy.)

So, you rock, update soon, yeah? C:

I cannot wait for the sexing/making out part. ahahaha.

TALK ABOUT EPIC.

OH, DARLING, YOU DO KNOW HOW TO MAKE THE MIND WORK~♥

This whole thing is just amazingly well worded. I mean, I forgot the fact that this six-thousand+ in length. I really did.

ILU, so muc, for the way you handled Kairi in this. She's just so...human? Really, she's just kickass and taking names but also, you know, not a **. Or a fandom cliche. (But a fandom bicycle? OH HEAVENS YES.)

B-but that isn't all.

You really, really integrate the atmosphere, the war, the plot, into this very, very well. Every moment spent is making this world and space come alive. There are answers and question a-and oh, God, I just want to dig my hands into the spine of it all.

But, sadly, this is not a realy book. So there really is no real spine to ben nor a page to flip.

So I shall wait, patiently (read as: YEAH RIGHT), for the next chapter. And flail. For this is Roxas/Kairi and it's you and I love you, so it's just a winning combination right off the batt. ♥

- Pixie