I think this is a wonderful chapter and fanfic and I am looking forward to read the next chapter very much.

This is so adorably crackalicious! My only beef it that it seems to be moving at an oddly fast pace along with some slight OOCness on the part of the four main characters. Otherwise, I really enjoy this. ^-^

Love it.

Oh.. That was great! I can't wait for the next chapter! Just wondering, what age is Fai now? And what was it about that sequel? Will it contain BL? It's okay if it doesn't. But.. I'd be happy if it did! Keep up the great work! Update soon!

From,
Zoey

Oops! Poor Syaoran-kun!
This is so good!
Please keep writing more!

Yay! I've been waiting for the latest chapter for so long! But I forgive you for taking so long. What I CAN'T forgive is that fact you won't make it BL. No!

I was practically crying when you wrote that. You hate me. You really hate me.

*Sigh* Anyway, AWESOME chapter and it really made up for all the time in between. Don't worry, I believe I understand. Eighth grade isn't so heavenly either.

Nyaah, so short!

Me ish kinda confused. Fai seems like an adult here but I still got the impression that he was a kid in the last chapter. Maybe I just missed something.

XDXD
w w w . w r i t e r m g . w e b s . c o m

like it
good work :)

so cute! fantastic idea! hurry and write more k?

Kuro is a lifeguard now! Yay! It was very hot when he ripped his shirt off and ran to save Fai. I kept imagining it in slow motion XD

Update soon~
I love it!

*HUGS FAI* poor baby great chap btw ^_^ cant wait for more

love it alot.

this was so good!!...but i think i got lost at the end...why was Fai in a tub of water?? hopefully the next chapter will explain!! update soon!

I..need..more!
OMG! I totally LOVED it!
I've been waiting for, like, ever!
Can't wait. Please update soon!

poor Fai but is it really wise for kuro to leave him alone in water after he almost drowned?