Waouh! I never posted comments before but I have to take action when I read a fic this good. I've read hundreds but only 4 or 5 that really got me from the first paragraph and made me turn off music, lose sense of time and reread sentences to savor them. You did a real good job failing to fall into the usual traps.
Finally no endless crap where they act like sissies in their high school years nor destroy each others like demons from hell. I loved how you made sanji angst in a perfectly credible way over his own very personal boundaries and how zoro's weird tenderness shows. I appreciated how you made them think and react in their own personality instead of injecting yours. One has no clue as to who might be the writter. No clue either concerning the timeline. It's nice to not know when it started or ended, and to not be bothered by what the others are doing in the meantime.
I also liked your original choice of words and narration. You have a very good style and you sure know how to make your readers' imagination go wild. So to sum it up very in character and believeable, very hot and very nice to read. Thank you for this fic and I'll definetely check out the rest of your work.
Maybe if enough of us feedback you you'll write many more so here's my little contribution.

Peace

this was an amazing way to mix smut with feeling...the way that they're both so nervous about being found out, and (yeah this review is almost a year later than the original story, oh well) it's just an interesting way of looking at their relationship. I like your style!

but the end killed me. uwah. but it seems almost fitting..

I really liked this fic - the tension, the steamy scenes and how they both worked through it - maybe one day they'll sort it out!

No!
How could you do this to me?! T.T WAH!...
this is so sad! i was expecting so much...u know what I want...
but its also so cool...the angst...wah!
Im dying...T.T

NO!

This was so perfect! DAmn it! Sanji! What are you thinking!?? You know what you wanted! Come on!

This was so fabulous but a happier ending would have sent me to heaven.

Oh god. That was so amazing and amazing. I was hoping for a happy ending, but the one you have fits so perfectly I wouldn't have it any other way.

G-R-E-A-T ENDING!
Thank you. That sounded so real.
Good job.

Sanji's such an idiot!What a sad sad ending...

T.T Stoopid Sanji...