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no yumi! kyouya is mine! Lol. Its pretty good. I like it :)

Awh that was really cool! well writen, interesting. I loved it!are you going to write more chapters? please do. I enjoyed this very much... hahaha maybe in the end you should have like all the oc's get together...haha i don't know *shrug* anyway, keep it up!

This was really good:D I love how it concentrates on the cannon, and not too much on the OC. GOOD JOB!:D