I am late to this of course ;)

But I really enjoyed this fic. Upperclassmen dynamic in P3 is fascinating and you capture them all so well. Especially impressed with how you write Mitsuru, she's rarely done justice.

It's an older story so this criticism may not be useful, but I did notice some shifts in POV within same scene (e.g. the sixth section). This might be deliberate, but it was a little jarring.

Otherwise, excellent work!

Waah!! I love it!

I love those three and am definitely pleased that there's another fic about them. A great one too. The relationship between Mitsuru and Shinjiro isn't explored very often both ingame and in fanfic, so this is definitely a plus. I love how Shinjiro has his (kind of) tender moments in this fic.

I couldn't help but cringe about Mitsuru's injury... it sounds quite painful. And I guess she's lucky that it didn't sever her spine...

Anyway...great job!!

I LOVED this fanfic, and it's definitely one of my fave Persona 3 fics. Everyone was in character, and even some other things, like the 'princess' thing, fit in really well.

It's definitely not every day that you see a fanfic this well written. Hope you keep writing more awesome fanfics about those three!

I loved every bit of this- your characterizations are just so perfect! This fic totally made my day. xD Ahh, Akihiko's getting a little antsy there at the end, isn't he? But wow, Mitsuru can definitely take care of herself, haha! I love how you portrayed their influences on each other- the three of them are so cute. ;w;

Very nice. Very very nice.

I love these 3 to death. I'm so glad an awesome writer like yourself is writing a one shots with them. Their characters' were spot on, I'm really impressed! Look forward to more senior S.E.E.S goodness.

Yay Mitsuru, Akihiko and Shinjiro!

You get these three in character better than anyone else. I loved it. Absolutly perfect.

Rarely has a fanfiction satisfied my fangirly giddiness. The characterization between Akihiko, Shinji, and Mitsuru were spot-on.

Holy *, you did it again!! =D Absolutely brilliant work. This was a very enjoyable read and once again, I love the way you characterized everyone and even showed Shinji's playful side. Great stuff; this is going down my faves. ^_^

... You are... simply amazing with these stories! I love how you focus around the three senpais and their younger years together in this one! Aha... Akihiko's getting jealous now? Geez... that's going to be escalating in later years. Oh well. Hehe... Mitsuru whips them into shape and they all start rubbing off on each other without noticing it themselves. This was awesome overall. I hope to see more of your work later!

I have to say that this is quite a well-done peice of writing you've managed to pull off here. I have to say I am particularly happy over Mitsuru's, Akihiko's and Shinjiro's responces to one another. This really puts a new perspective on what they were like as the original members of SEES. I'm preety much LOLing right now at the fact that they're ifluencing one another so much. It's quite the interesting spectical isn't it.

Give yourself a well deserved pat on the back for being able to write such a skilled piece of work.