I love it! Such a great look at the Donnellys- I especially love the end with Tommy keeping track and everyone knowing the neighborhood will be his. Excellent!

really cute love how you describe tommy!

I really really like your style of writing. You said so much in a short piece. Excellent story!

i really liked the simplicity of this! It was a good quick read :)

I liked this. Short and simple but still making a point. The last bit with Tommy watching the fight and making sure there are no feuds even though he hasn't claimed the neighbourhood yet was spot on. Sounded just like Tommy. Great job!

Great job...I really liked it