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| bharned1 2008-09-21 ch 5, | abuseThe story is excellent, please, update someday! |
| jojobevco 2008-09-09 ch 5, | abusegood story! |
| Falcon-Rider 2008-08-29 ch 5, | abuseI noticed that your a.note said you had writers block... well perhaps skipping ahead a few years would help it... I love this story and can't wait to see how am does things- though I really miss John/Cam... someone also has to notice her lack of aging one day... |
| SSG Michael B Jackson 2008-08-24 ch 5, | abuseThis has been a great read so far, and I hope you'll continue on; I'd love to see where and how it goes. I have the feeling that things are going to go much better for the resistance this time around... Of course, this raises a couple of questions for me; since Cameron, not John is going to take on this Messianic role, does that mean that Skynet will send an agent back in time to eliminate her? And does this mean no terminator action for Sarah (which of course means no Kyle and no John?) Ah, temporal paradoxes and alternate timelines... Oh, and of course the other question... do any of the new resistance members (or Skynet!) ever figure out what she really is? That could make for some interesting, if awkward, moments. Mike Jackson |
| zahnfan23 2008-08-21 ch 5, | abuseThis is now my favorite Cameron story on the board, can't wait to see what is next. |
| Tom 67 2008-08-10 ch 2, | abuseInteresting first chapter, but she built skynet? Hm i was thinking that in the show, she mightn't actually want skynet to not be built/. After all how would she be built if it were stopped, but she did steal that bar of coltan. Onward |
| Metropolis Kid 2008-07-21 ch 5, | abuseI didn't think I'd like a terminator story where John was gone, but this was pretty good! Honestly, I started reading just to see what you were doing with the "Endless Panckes"; but I found myself enjoying the story. You're writing was very descriptive, and I liked all the references. (Finding Nemo, Hamlet, the McGrady's drunk singing of the song form Wicked and, most of all, Serenity. I smiled at that one.) I honestly don't know if I'll read the rest or not. I'm going through a bit of a difficult time right now, family things that I won't bother you with. I've even had to cut back on some of my writing. However, I did enjoy this; and, if I can find the free time, I would like to read more. Have a good day, and God bless. Metropolis Kid. |
| happyhooligan2001 2008-07-20 ch 5, | abuseI loved the prom scene! I've been struggling with Cameron's emotions myself. She starts by faking emotions then slowly develops real emotions that she sometimes has to hide. And how did you get Hiragani characters in your story? I can't even figure out how to get a percent sign in. I bow to your mastery. |
| King Steve 2008-07-19 ch 5, | abuseAnother great chapter! It was worth the wait in my opinion. I like how Cameron's not only emerging as the leader of the resistance, but as almost the complete opposite to the Future John Connor you described. Will this make her a more effective leader? I think it could do. I really do like your John/Cam flashbacks, and the Prom flashback from this chapter is my favourite so far, it's really sad that Cameron's longing for John, in hindsight, and couldn't understand their closeness at the time it happened. One thing though, this is just a personal thing, but I really hope nothing happens between O'Reilly and Cameron. Really enjoying this fic, cant wait til the next chapter! |
| Alana84 2008-07-18 ch 5, | abuseWow, another mega long chapter, which was awesome btw, I really liked it! The flashback scene was absolutely amazing, I think, it was very nicely described and all that! The picture of Cameron was stunning as well and I totally loved the whole prom scene, especially the interaction between John/Cameron, of course, as usual, lol! But I also liked the other scenes, and I cannot wait to see what's going to happen next? So please update soon... |
| Jalex002 2008-07-17 ch 5, | abuseThe Terminator website is down so I registered here just so I could say how great I think this fanfic is :) Its good to see that Cameron didn't come out of her fight with the T-1 unharmed, although she's more advanced Cameron is designed as a Terminator not a fighter. Can't wait to see how Cameron becomes more human and how her relationship with O' Reilly is starting to develop. |
| The Maestro 2008-07-17 ch 5, | abuseThis is one of my favorite T:TSC fics, and I'm glad that you keep on writing...too many people start good fics then abandon them. Keep up the excellent work! “Movie night tonight. We’re watching Serenity.” Haha! Awesome! |
| Myxale 2008-07-17 ch 5, | abusePoetic, beautiful, well chosen words are merged into one of the most wonderful reads I've had in weeks. It's so good, that my limitation of the English language becomes apparent to me! If i could just borrow words! This chapter didn't have any action, but yet it move lots of things! The connecting of the people of NORAD, The Prom, John and Cam, the building of the other "cast" like O'Reilly (whom I really like) and the Reese boys and finally Cam's growing! A magical J&C moment; You do John well. Minimalistic and yet forward. The way John thinks that he could love her is much more potent this way, that when some people insist that he already does or will do! I find myself always looking forward to Cam's flashbacks! You -and I stated this before- have a real good approach where Cam's "evolution" is concerned! The tech part you have down dam well! And it makes sense! That's what's most important! Will read this again tonight! There is much more I could rant off, but to minimize the danger of running out of things to say for the later chapters, I stop now! ;) Cheers! |
| Terminator Fan 2008-07-12 ch 4, anon. | abuseGreat work! In some other fan fic's, Cameron develops not simulated but genuine emotions. It seems that she is heading slowly in that direction, but many readers may have preferred to see that happen prior to the death of John Connor. Still, I really love the idea of Cameron as the new human resistance leader! |
| happyhooligan2001 2008-07-07 ch 4, | abuseA delightful little battle. It should establish Cameron's reputation among the soldiers. You also did a good job expanding John and Cameron's relationship. The last part was especially good. It would take some extraordinary kids to walk from Los Angeles to Cheyenne Mountain but the Reese brothers define extraordinary. Loved the Firefly reference too! |