Lol! So cute! Hahaha!

the sotry was good but the weird pet names were really annoying.

Shield poor Edwards virgin eyes from the badness... Aw... poor Edward... lol i loved that! it was so cute! espcially Edward little pet names for Bella. Lambiekins! Sweetmeet! Disney princess! those are just hysterical.

wow edward is such a prude
lol
how cute
i loved it a lot
edward is so scared in this fanfic

LOL! That was delightfully refreshing!

Lol. Victoria's Secret...it took me a minute to understand it but then finally i did...i cracked up for hours!!

Poor Edward :L
Amusing :)

lol...this was too funny! Very cute...