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| starwefter 2008-07-16 ch 1, | abuseDamn, I just plain liked this! |
| Setoglomper 2008-06-26 ch 1, | abuseThat was awesome. |
| ml101 2008-06-13 ch 1, | abuseMan this was utterly cool! It was really. I'm such a Seto fan and this was so cool to read. |
| sherabo 2008-06-12 ch 1, | abuseSeto, is almost normal after you get a hold of him. I the approach of the gang and Seto giving in, but not really giving it. Really nice ! This is a side of Seto I would love to see written more, it gives him character. You write the good stuff and the rest of us will continue with the smutt. smiles... I truly enjoy reading Seto through your eyes. |
| Yokai Summoner 2008-06-04 ch 1, | abuseThis story seemed to be a continuation of "Don't Seal Yourself Away" fic, and it turned out very well. It was interesting that Kaiba returned, but his health was not the same. And, the fact that Yugi and his friends were worried and went to check if he was oaky was perfect. It turns out exactly how it should've happened and the stubborn Kaiba will eventually have to accept them being his friends, especially when he said, " “One of these days…” he said, with a false air of scorn. “They’re going to seem too reasonable to perpetually ignore.”" Well, I wonder what will happen in your next fic, and hopefully he will get better. ^_^ Yokai Summoner |
| Kermita 2008-06-03 ch 1, | abuseYay! Lovely story. Haha, I liked the end. Seto Kaiba's KaibaCorp always deserves the best. Sure, nice cover up Kaiba. xDD I liked this One Shot alot. Thanks for the update! |
| Sakurelle 2008-06-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseNice. This was very, very well written! ^^ |
| Pfefferminztea 2008-06-03 ch 1, | abuseMay I kiss you? XD I was so excited to discover that knows a genre named "Friendship", and now I actually found a story that DOES deserve the name. (I´m sure there are plenty of others, and I´m not trying to offend anyone - this was just the first one I found.) Anyway, I love this. Ther should be way more fics concentrating on this kind of relationships, though I know from personal experience that they are harder to write than romance, mainly because there are no strict plots... usually. Thanks, and thanks again, for proving that it IS possible! |
| dragonlady222 2008-06-03 ch 1, | abuseReally great! Seto would act that way and then when they were gone admit they were right. Never to their faces though. |
| The Duelist's Heiress 2008-06-03 ch 1, | abuseI like this story, and how you seem to easily take Kaiba's cold demeanor, and warm him up a bit. A very good story. TDH |
| LuckyLadybug 2008-06-03 ch 1, | abuseSquee! X3 Yay ficlit! I really like how you tied it in with some of your others. It makes even more sense that way. The sarcastic banter is one of my favorite parts, especially Seto saying they should apply to med school and Téa saying she thought he'd be too stubborn to get sick at all. LOL. And them being able to get through the barrier ever so slowly is so great! I love Seto finally listening to them and preparing to go home. And also how he's thinking that things are making sense. I just found one little typo near the end: Mokuba sent a silent thanks to others. Missing "the", I think. |