Hahaha very far from a brother! lol That was cute! Peter was being all moody, and I liked that Caspian stepped up when Peter felt too guilty to. Nice job!

This was perfect! I can imagine the scene quite clearly in my mind...

I loved your take on the story!

It would be great if you could fill in the other blank spaces with Susan and Caspian.

Another very satisfying one-shot. Again, you captured the characters superbly, especially describing the tension that followed the unsuccessful attack on the castle. I like how Susan talked about her brothers and how you mentioned the "surviving on apples alone" part of the book. And I just love the last line. You are good at this.

AWESOME!

Aww poo, did you have to end it there? :( You so have to continue this, doll!

Very nice missing scene. Excellent character development in just these few pages. Aww, Susan, we know, we know!!:D

nice...and left me wanting more!

u HAVE to continue this. if u don't, ill wound u.

Nice. I always enjoy reading interlude fics. It fleshes out the movie for us fans, since the movie couldn't put every little thing in.
Just a thought, but would a companion fic to this piece be possible in the future? You're a good writer, and I can never get enough from the really good writers.

I love the end very good

Adorable and more than worthy of an epilogue, perhaps?

aw hot cute!

Hola!! continualo esta cute!! por fis, es genial!! muajajaja

this is so freaking awesome! it's a beautiful story, with all the interaction between caspian and susan. it's just so pretty :D
can you write more stories on suspian? i'd love you for it :D