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| Professor Know-it-all 2008-08-01 ch 12, | abusePretty ending...drool... Loved it! |
| Ghostwriter 2008-07-31 ch 12, | abuseGreat job. Keep it up. Catch ya on the flip side. |
| FeedYourHead77 2008-07-31 ch 12, | abuseAww. Cute ending. Glad all is well with Tom and Booker at last. Cannot wait for Vengance! Will there be more Tommy Torture?? Say yes, say yes! Hahaha, that's not just a little twisted of me : / ...don't think that I haven't read The Lost, I have, I HAVE! Just didn't get a chance to review with the end of vacation and being back home. SO SORRY! Loved how you handed the whole story, though, even if you did kill Elaina (b*tch!! ahhaha :]). Hmm, know what? --I'm going to re-read The Lost right now and give you the reviews you deserve! |
| tewksgirl 2008-07-31 ch 12, | abuseI think the ending was just fine. I'm glad Hanson didn't loose his eyesight. Not that he still wouldn't be hot, but... LOL! This was an excellent story...full of suspense and TT! Yeah, love that TT! I can't wait to start reading Vengeance now...I'm addicted! AH, oh well. Do you think they have a TT anonymous? HA HA HA LOL... |
| procol harum 2008-07-31 ch 12, | abuseGood ending, short and simple... and Tom can see again :D |
| wolfbane17 2008-07-24 ch 11, | abusereally great story so far. I simply loved it! Please keep it up!! |
| lamexicana 2008-07-14 ch 11, | abusehey, hey... very good one... I was expecting such action... thank you very much... now please don´t be selfish and give us a little more of ang (booker please). I know you are finishing this one but just one more... c´mmon... say YES¡¡ |
| Professor Know-it-all 2008-07-13 ch 11, | abuseHahaha! Tommy is a regular Agent Sands! how awesome! |
| Professor Know-it-all 2008-07-13 ch 10, | abuseYou have put them through one hell of a ride. After this you'll have to write them on vacation or something just to make it up to them. |
| Professor Know-it-all 2008-07-13 ch 9, | abuseIt's hard for you because rape, of anyone, is wrong. But, if we ignore the problem, only more people will get hurt in the end and nothing will happen to fix this problem. This wasn't at all disturbing for me, I write/read some hardcore stuff. But, I am glad that it was hard for you, because, that just shows me what a fine, upstanding person you are. God, that didn't come out like I thought it would. I hope you get what I ams aying. Sorry. |
| Professor Know-it-all 2008-07-13 ch 8, | abuseTommy really is pretty. There was guy at my work place once that said he'd go gay for Johnny Depp. Ha! not before the other rabid fan girls got to him first. *lol* |
| Professor Know-it-all 2008-07-13 ch 7, | abuseI am totally catching up here. Sorry about that. We have family coming over and Mom's been having me shampoo rugs most of this past week. Sorry. Anyway, getting interesting. I can't wait to see what happens next. |
| Ghostwriter 2008-07-09 ch 11, | abuseAwesome job. I'll be on the lookout for it. Catch ya on the flip side. |
| procol harum 2008-07-09 ch 11, | abuseOh great chapter, loved all the suspense, and with Tom having to using the gun even though he can't see. Update soon, and yay for WCH :D |
| FeedYourHead77 2008-07-09 ch 11, | abuseOh oh oh! How god that chappie was! Very intense, very well written. Can't believe Hanson shot Booker, but I'm not really surprised that he had bad aim going on. He's kinda blind, which you better reverse! Cannot wait for more! |