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| screamxheart 2008-08-30 ch 7,  | abuseThis chapter is really good. |
| 2laz2login 2008-08-28 ch 7, anon. | abuseHelena Astoria? ahahahaa i so recognise that:P nice one. i loved that story |
| What Emma Did Next 2008-08-27 ch 7, | abuseLovely chapter! |
| Fyre of the Funeral Pyre 2008-08-27 ch 7, | abusethat was awesome! can't wait for another!' l8s |
| lafayette722 2008-08-25 ch 7, | abuseI don't really like Helena.I hope Victoria isan't in Slytherin. |
| remuslives23 2008-08-25 ch 7, | abuseHow she didn't punch that cow I don't know! Nice chapter and I'm looking forward to the next. |
| silentxsoul 2008-08-25 ch 7, | abusePlease don't be Slytherin. Please don't be Slytherin. Please don't be Slytherin. Please don't be Slytherin. Please don't be Slytherin. Please don't be Slytherin. Please don't be Slytherin. Please don't be Slytherin. Please don't be Slytherin. Please don't be Slytherin. Please don't be Slytherin. Please don't be Slytherin. Please don't be Slytherin. Please don't be Slytherin. Please don't be Slytherin. Please don't be Slytherin. Please don't be Slytherin. Please don't be Slytherin. Okay enough of that... I love this chappie. Although, I wish it were a tad bit longer. Keep up the good work. P.S. Love the whole enemy thing. |
| Likewow5556 2008-08-25 ch 7, | abuseAmazing chapter, like always! I just had one question, did you decide the pairings for this story? I'm just curious. Well anyways amazing chapter and i can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon! |
| notwritten 2008-08-25 ch 7, | abuseA very interesting, and pleasant chapter. Keep smiling. :-) |
| Estel Ashlee Snape 2008-08-25 ch 7, | abuseHostile. Cant wait til she meets the trio. Keep up the good work! ~Estel |
| crazyanimallvr93 2008-08-25 ch 7, | abusereally good, but somehow i dont see victoria fitting in well with the slytherins even though she seems to be holding her own. i hope she gets in to gryffindor on one habd, but it would also be nice to see another houses point of view. UPDATE xD |
| Nuvola 2008-08-25 ch 7, | abusehey noc007! once again, good work! you kept me hooked another time, and waiting for the next chapter! may i just point out a slight mistake i think you did... it is in the paragraph where tracey folded the paper. she said voldie's name, and as people still called him you know who or the dark lord in harry's 4th yr, i think she should not have called him by name. if it was part of the story, well then, forget it :p anyway, keep up the good work, and hope to hear soon from you! all the best, nuvola |
| qt4good 2008-08-25 ch 7, | abuseSo was Astoria there? Or has she not shown up yet? Good work once again |
| Rose of the West 2008-08-25 ch 7, | abuseIsn't it amazing when a character takes one for a ride? I'm enjoying the interaction between all the kids. |
| ifyoujump 2008-08-25 ch 7, | abusegood chapter! what's up with helena? |