Voice one: Wow, that sucks.

Voice two: The fic or her little mary-sue comments at the beginning and end?

Voice one: Both!

Voice two: I agree!

Gosh, cliffie there please finsh!

Ty*runs in circles* AH AH AH AH AH AH AH AH! Vegeta*raises eye brow* Why do I let him read those things?

KILL GOKU AND FELL MY WRATH WEAK AUTHOR TYPE PERSON![transforms to Demon Kara] good story though

This is going to be on the best fights of the year. More, please and hurry. I'm dying of suspense.-Davis-

Ty: KEWLO! THAT RULES HALO! MORE ASAP! *thinks* Hey am I evil? *runs to go look in mirror* Vegeta and Trunks-_-

If I was to laugh, then I already have. The commentary at the start and end was funny, not to mention the main story itself. I enjoy the suspense and I a want more.-Davis-

Cool story! I can't wait for more chapters _

Make one of the Saiyens girlys i wish there was a girl sayien in the sereis BUT NO JAPAN HAD TO BE STINGY! [goes into rant mode] Talonmon-We have lost here, dont owrry once she runs out of oxygen she will snap out of it GOOD STORY DO MORE OR I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN LIKE A SAYIEN WITH HIS TAIL ON FIRE [laughs evilly] QUATRE IS MINE I AM TEH SOCK QUEEN ALL SOCK SBOW TO ME!