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Reviews For: 50 drabbles

Aqualoner
2008-06-27
ch 1,
abuseThis was really a great insight of Zuko and Iroh. I love their relationship.
-Aqua
Thanks for reviewing my story.
Anti-Logic
2008-06-06
ch 1,
abuseVery beautiful! ^^ I loved this one: "Zuko felt his face turn beet red when he realized that, contradictory to his uncle’s previous assurances, gullible was not written on the ceiling."

One thing...I'm pretty sure "Oazi" is spelled "Ozai." But nitpicking aside, very nice!
AriTeir
2008-06-04
ch 1,
abuseWow! These were simply amazing! Every single one of them was touching and sweet. You're truely a talented author!


P.S
I did however notice a typo in 'Sanity' you wrote Songs, instead of what I assume was meant to be Sons. I had to read it a few times before I relised that, but hey whats a a single Typo in a set of drabbles as good as these?
Ardala91
2008-06-03
ch 1,
abuseThat was beautiful. I love Iroh and Zuko!
fourfourfourfour
2008-06-03
ch 1,
abusethese were so imaginitive and cute :D kudos
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