This is sweet and I'm glad you made Bella so hesitant. I hated BD *ducks as daggers are thrown violently from several directions* and hated that they got married so young. I just wanted Bella to grow up a little first. She was (despite SM's belief in her unbelievable maturity) incredibly immature (and rightly so! She was a teenager-- it's only normal and right) *sigh* But if BD and the ridiculously too early wedding had to happen, this is my fav take on the pre-wedding jitters. Edward was blessedly non-melodramatic and Alice was wonderfully crazy. I loved him hiding the champagne flutes on her! hehe! And Bella's original hesitations were not simply swept under the rug. Anyway, just wanted to say I liked it! :)

very cute, loved the last line!

priceless...

Very cool. I love it! I haven't read the first chapter of Breaking Dawn yet (cause I can't find the special edition of eclipse ANYWHERE! **silently curses all booksellers**) but this would make a brilliant first chapter. Very good. :)

Aw, cute story. ^^ Well written indeed, lol.

So beautiful! I love how Edward interacts with Bella! Great job!

I hope you update soon and continue with this!

Great =D
I love it, can't wait for Breaking dawn =D

I was extremely bored tonight, so I was looking around at some of my favorite stories to reread. I found myself looking at your page for the nth time. Imagine my delight when I saw you had written a Twilight story!

I really enjoyed it, and I thought you portrayed Bella to a tee. Bravo!

Daw... *giggle* Strangely enough, "It would be typical of you to get married in a cast." struck me as the funniest line. Great work!

this was great! i love it! ^_^

Sigh...is it bad that when I read the story description, my knees melted to mush?! There's something about that Edward...anyways, great beginning, great character continuation, can't wait to read more.

That was great! Amazing even. Very in character for Bella in my opinion. I love your writing style.

That was a lovely surprise! I am also a HUGE Twilight fan and this is the first piece of Twilight fan fic I've felt tempted to read. It was fantastic, naturally! You never cease to amaze me; I hope a scene like this appears in Breaking Dawn!!

Okay, that was really cute. You did a good job with the characterization. I haven't read the first chapter (didn't get the special edition) but this was nice. That said, yours will be the only Twilight fanfic I ever read. The books are too much like fanfiction themselves. I like them, but at the same time I hate 'em. Go figure.

Thanks for sharing!

I LOVE IT! IT was really good...kepp it up. I am looking forward to your next update