this story just keeps getting better and better. I keep wondering what will happen to Sophia and Edward. I LUV IT. plz, plz, plz update soon.

I love this story! :P

...and then edward gets sick. LUV it! i wouldn't really want any of this in twilight, because it would ruin the plot, but it makes a great fan-fic! Update as soon as possible!plz!

so he doesnt love bella?

Great job! Please post more! :)

I'm glad you updated!

It seems cute! :P

Hey, i like your story, im curious as to where its going! Please write more!