I love this story. Always reminds me of the Battle of Pashcendale from WWI, anywho, great job. 10/10.

The truth of war, eh?
You're enemy is only an enemy until you see his face.

Love it! I almost felt like I was there. You do this very well!

Nice oneshot, except I have on problem: commas.

In the very first few sentences, I spotted a few comma mistakes, and found some more as it went on.