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| Sticky Wins 2008-06-04 ch 1,  | abuseOh I like this very much! 8] It's so simple and powerful. Poetic, I think. I especially like the title- I'm assuming it's a reference to the bagatelle used in music, referencing to the innocent character in music, or something like that. (Out of the wikipedia articles that popped up, this one made the most sense, haha.) Anyway, bravo! A lovely, chilling little piece you've got here. |
| Ruingaraf 2008-06-04 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. I love it, it really does well to represent the symbolism of Melodia and Malpercio. |
| Fan Fan Girl 2008-06-03 ch 1, | abuse*screams* ... *continues to scream* ... *vocal cords snap* I...LOVE...THIS!! It's beautiful! The flow and imagery and and and... oh... I love it! This is, by a long shot, my favorite of everything you've written so far. And I'm not just saying that because I like Melodia. XD It's just... the images are so haunting and beautiful... I could see everything without even trying. And it was almost...romantic...as Malpercio brought her back to life... (I'm pretty sure that's what happened, at least.) And that's something I've never seen before, and I loved it. This amazing. Amazing, I tell you. But... *small voice* ...in the first paragraph, the "Dozens of flowers decorated the walls and furniture of the quaint room" sentence didn't quite fit with the previous ones... I would have recommended moving it somewhere else... Besides that, I loved it!! *faints* |