Sorry my last review was posted twice, delete one of them. (:
The next three chapters were sort of rushed in my opinion. There was no pre-dating flirty bantering, no getting to know each other. I think that Valerie and Soda would've taken things a little slower, especially because of the difference in their social status. Also, you should go deeper into the characters emotions, especially since Valerie is an original character (atleast I don't remember her in the book [:) so we'll need to get to know her. There's nothing better than that sweaty palms, butterflies feeling of a crush that you just want to be around. :)

This is all constructive critism to help you, I think this is an adorbable story and mean it to come across in the nicest way possible :)

Just a quick correction: Soda has dark brown eyes, not blue-green. That was Darry.
Of course, that's an easy mistake, and we can't all be nerds like me and remember random facts about our favorite book characters.
Great first chapter, I'm definitely going to continue reading this when I don't have a Spanish test to study for. I love a well-written Soc/Greaser romance. :)

Just a quick correction: Soda has dark brown eyes, not blue-green. That was Darry.
Of course, that's an easy mistake, and we can't all be nerds like me and remember random facts about our favorite book characters.
Great first chapter, I'm definitely going to continue reading this when I don't have a Spanish test to study for. I love a well-written Soc/Greaser romance. :)

Awh <3 i cant wait to see what happens with Valerie and Soda!!:)
Update soon please

i like this story,
please update?

i lovee this story!

OMG! ITS ACTUALLY AN UPDATE TO THE STORY! AH!! **huffhuff** u seriously need 2 update more often but other than that the story is way good!

GAH! i love it lmao :]

hey...awesome story...what happens next? lol...keep on writing :)

really good

Don't take to long to update.. I want to read what happens next very,very soon

I really like this story. Finally a Socs who isn't conceded!! Can't wait for the next update

damn i hate sherri lol update soon!

Love it so far.

I really like this story. I can't wait for more!