yay! A KISS! finaly!

UPDATE!

This story is so amazing! I love it!
Favoriting right now!
Also, if you like Zelda yaoi, you should check out my sotries!
^_~

love the story. can't wait for the next chapter.

interesting story so far, a little confusing, but I guess I'll understand later XD

Good luck with later chapters ;)

Loving the story so far. :D

I can't wait until the next chapter!

Please update soon!

Very cute! Definitely goes to my favs! :D

Please update soon T_T

This has got to be one of the best chapters. It's fantastically CUTE, and I almost never see stuff like it when it's an Envy x Ed pairing. I loved Ed's reaction to Envy's little stumble, and the whole scene was really well played out. It was real and yet at the same time... - my words are failing me -


Update soon!

(BTW, I read the AN at the end and almost had a heart attack when I saw my name there. XD Thanks)

XD I loved this chapter. Ed was lying and he knows it. He cares. HA. - dances in celebration of fluff -

The pacing was a bit slow on this one, but it's still good. I love the imagery. It's written almost like a work of art. Visually stunning. It captures the little moments and turns them into something bigger.

Two fabulous chapter, which I loved btw!

I totally loved the scene about Envy's tattoo, it was pretty sensual, I think!

And also the one in the movie theater, that was cute and funny.

But the best one must have been the last one, in the guys restroom, oh my, even though it was an evil cliffhanger, lol!

Cannot wait to read more, so please update soon...

coolies on the chapter, loved the movie scene

very coolies on the chpater

Another lovely chapter!

Hehe..Kissing in the mens room; not -that's- something I haven't read yet. But I know, that if I was a guy, and in that bathroom, I would be all "OMGWTF!! Two guys (I think...Yeah, they are) are kissing while I'm trying to take a **! -looks down-..Great..Now I'm all hard, too!" XD However, it makes me wonder if -that's- what guys really do in the bathrooms XD.

Ah...I don't use any special artsy things; mainly because my computer's crapola. Sorry I couldn't help. :[

Hehe..I have TONS of favorite fanfics on my favorite list...There's too many to recomend to put here, though. :P.

Holy **, this is so good, okay, so it's actually more than good, it's effing amazing! The plot's so awesome and so is the character portrayal, especially Ed and Envy, well, naturally, of course, hehe!

And I almost fell out of my chair when I scrolled down the first chapter; I mean, about you kinda portraying Envy's looks out of a mix between Bill and Tom Kaulitz (I'm not sure if that comes out right, oh well...), I just “OMG”, that could so work and wow, I'm a major TH fan btw, hehe! Envy’d so fit with the description of a mix between said twins looks, lol!

And I really like the fact that this story’s taken place in present day (if I’m correct that is) and that Envy and the others aren’t human, if you know what I mean, hehe!

So apparently Envy/Ed was fighting each other from the moment they lay eyes on each other, now that’s pretty awesome, me like a lot, laughs!

Poor Ed though, he always seems to get hurt and ending up in the hospital, awe! And I do feel pretty sorry for Envy as well, due to this chapter, Dante sure is a crazy SOB; I hate her now, but for good reasons, eh!

The Envy torture was a great feature nonetheless, so…I really liked it, even though I kinda hated it, if you get what I mean, hehe! Oh, well…

Cannot wait for more, to see what you’ve in store for our favourite sin and sinner, so please update soon…

very AWSOME chapter now we know what happened after Ed passed out and Dante is such a b*tch i hope she dies in a deserving kinda way ... oh and i shall be a loyal reviewer as long as you keep posting