aw yusuke was actually shy! i give this 5/5 so write more please!!

more ^.^ i'd lov to see more.

Oh, this should be interesting. . .
*As I die of laughter*

hey you!

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!

please :D

YU-chan!

i might have been sent to the nether world if yusuke were real. LOL

I like it so far. Please update soon!

poor yusuke, this will be fun

LOL, poor Yusuke and Keiko, inadvertently giving their friends fan-service!

Heh...well, some things are rough but I liked the silk straightjacket. Exactly how old is he now? Well, Keiko is eighteen now, you said in chapter two, so I guess him too. Having very hard time imagining Shizuru laughing like that, but otherwise nothing too out of character. I thought he already ditched the hair gel, though.

'Yu-chan' is funny, though. I loved in the second volume when he possessed Kuwabara and they were apparently entirely oblivious to the fact that Yusuke was at least as much of a punk as Kuwabara. I never managed to FIND the original Japanese of most of it, because the dub's good...or rather, it was good by the end of the first Tournament. At the beginning Yusuke sounds like a Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtle and most of the other voices are irritating beyond all reason. Yusuke especially grew into his role. Okay. Pulled an accidental all-nighter, talking too much as a direct result. Anyway, how do I attach my comments to chapter two and send it back? Am I supposed to just PM you? If so, can we just do this by e-mail, because that's a totally inefficient system...-_-; (I'll have to type out a description of where every error is...)

Please update! This is going to be SOO entertaining

Sounds like the beginning of a really good story. x3 Pretty funny too, Yusuke is definitely in character. Hope to see more!

lmao! ha ha Yu-chan lol.

very excited to see where this goes.