Seth is loved by everyone. he is always needed and wanted. nobody ever wants to get rid of him. he makes people smile and be happy. period. I have nothing against the pairing, but you ruined Seth. ugh

God...I can't believe that's how this story ended! It was really well written, the chapters were really short, but I loved it none the less! I just wish I understood why you turned the story out of no where! You know you wrote something good if you not only make me think, but you SOMEHOW did something to my emotions, and just cuz I feel really terrible, doesn't mean the story was terrible, on the contrary, it means that the story was moving to me and it means that what you wrote good or bad affected me. A good story doesn't mean that you have to end it happy, and I think you got that! I loved the story, the ending tore me up inside, and now I think I'm going to cut my wrists, lol j/k but damn I feel so weird now! I guess I need a mary sue for a pick me up! lol *yeah right, I hate mary-sue, if I wanted mary-sue I would read the original Twilight!* lol

I...wha... O.o ...?

Kay, I'm not gonna lie, I think you lost me in this chapter! I don't fully understand, cuz it kinda makes the whole story itself useless! Either way I'm going to keep reading on! Guess it's cuz I liked the idea of them two!

I feel compelled to ask, how old is Seth in this story, doesn't matter to me, but it's never really stated! Either way, it would be a cute site to see Seth holding hands with Edward!

I cannot believe that they left! Even Alice was against him! WTF?

Aw, poor Stinky Seth! How come he thinks he stinks too? Maybe his scent will disappear after a while!

What the hell is Sam getting mad for? It was his fault that that even happened in the first place! He dumped Seth with Edward!

Damn, I can't believe that the Pack is acting like that to him! I'm so team Jacob, but in your storyverse, I'm so mad at him! Man, why does the pack treat Seth so badly?!?!?!

Wow, I'm not complaining, but that was fast! I guess Seth is SO cute that even Edward would feel that he needed to make him smile!

Aw, Edward said he wanted Seth! Poor Seth, he feels like a no one!

Aw, Seth is always a cutie no matter what story he's in! And hopefully he can warm up Edward's cold heart!

I very much was enjoying this story until chapter 9. I think that you wrote a good story, it was just misleading when the story is listed as a Edward/Seth story and you even put that in the story warning.

So yeah, good job on the story, I would just seriously consider addressing the whole pairing issue.

ahh that's so sweet and cute and adorable and anyother words that mean those things :)

It's not Seth's fault -.-
Poor Edward. Poor, poor Edward.
I was hoping this story would have a happy ending... But alas, it didn't and now I'm sad. -Crys-

~IP~