SOUL. OMM NON NON. WRITE. NOW.

dude! i loved morbid curiosity and i am extremely interested to see what happens next in this story! You're doing a lovely job creating imagery (something i need to work on lol) and i hope you keep writing.

Update my friend! Or I shall eat your soul! Om Nom Nom!

update update update! Nyuu~ Please? Me and my friend love this story and wish for you to update, infact this story is what I used to get her addicted to fanfiction like myself. But cliff hangers are evil so you must update or may the plot bunney nom your soul.

This is not a super meaningful comment or anything but i like your story do continue meanwhile i'll read your deisaku story and have a pint of chocolate milk.Once again well done please continue and drink your milk.

Ame

It is still good even though you don't have a beta at this time. I loved it and I can't wait for more!

aw wee lil first graders? right on maahiyum!


and i liked this chapter...i don't know who to feel more sorry for, sakura or hidan.

best of luck in everything youre up too girl!

*gives maahiyum a gai approved thumbs up*

Dx cliffy!

Good chapter.

Then I won't expect constant updates. It's a good story nonetheless, even without a beta. Pretty good, actually.

It's good that you do things in your community, keeps you out of trouble.

Lord Jashin's Loyal Servant,
Soren

Okay, I've read both of these stories in the span of a week. I must say, I wasn't expecting such an excellent story. While it seems mostly cannonical, Hidan is sometimes OOC, as is Sakura. They seem more...modern, which I assume is the product of the authors attachment to this reality.

Regardless, it's very well written, and I hope for an update soon.

FOR LORD JASHIN!
Soren

i really like this story. When r u gonna continue it? Cuz i hope its soon.

can't wait for you to update!!

UPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATE! you catching my drift here? =)

Yay an update!
Lol, Sakura was almost a sacrifice ^_^ That would have been amusing to explain...
I wonder what will happen next? I hope Hidan's worry is for nothing.

I'm so glad you updated, and I can't wait for the next chapter! Please continue soon! I loved it! :)