Good job. that was nice

Oh wow. This is both sweet, funny and just heart-tuggingly good. The line about Tony sleeping on the floor was heartbreaking. The exchange between Tony and Pepper were perfectly on par with the movie. I love the pairing and you write them very well. Must go look to see if you any more Ironman pieces on your list. :)

Aw, so sentimental and sweet and so very in-character! I love this story, I really do. I'm not sure what exactly it is that makes it so good, but there's definitely something that makes me smile. Subtle characterization, perhaps.
Anyway, nice work!

Being a classic rock fan, I understand completely that it doesn't mean you can't break away into other things, and I really like the fact that its so uncommon for him that Pepper takes notice. Change...the change into a newer music, the change by finally finishing the car.

One thing that bothered me a little was the change in present tense to past tense. It's hard to combine the two and I think if it were modified just to be past tense it would make this piece a lot stronger.

I really liked this though!

:)
Nice. This might just be me nitpicking, but if Tony's a fan of classic rock, he'd probably pick a sad song from that genre.
That and I basically hate Coldplay. But the fic was aces, spl Pepper taking a raincheck on that drink. :D