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Reviews for: Pack Mentality
Timeloopy
2009-08-30 . chapter 4
That was a really nice story! I enjoyed it immensely. Thanks for sharing it with us!
Timeloopy
2009-08-30 . chapter 3
I was wrong. This isn't pretty good - this is GREAT! I love this story. It's the best thing I've read on here I think. Very creative - very nice blending of the characteristics of the wolf with the characters on the show. Just amazing!
Timeloopy
2009-08-30 . chapter 2
This is pretty good! Nice job!
CrazeeKitty
2008-06-04 . chapter 4
I loved this story. You have no idea how long I've been waiting for someone to write a story along these lines. (Especially with Sawyer, I'm sorry but this guy actually does practically snarl when he gets mad, and with all the weird stuff that goes on with the island in addition to the Dharma folks and their experiments. Well...) I think you did a really good job on characterization and believability (given the show canon/mythos). I enjoyed how descriptive you were too. Everything was very vivid to me. It was truly a pleasure to read.
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