 CrazeeKitty 2008-06-04 . chapter 4I loved this story. You have no idea how long I've been waiting for someone to write a story along these lines. (Especially with Sawyer, I'm sorry but this guy actually does practically snarl when he gets mad, and with all the weird stuff that goes on with the island in addition to the Dharma folks and their experiments. Well...) I think you did a really good job on characterization and believability (given the show canon/mythos). I enjoyed how descriptive you were too. Everything was very vivid to me. It was truly a pleasure to read. |