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| Alieh 2008-08-24 ch 7, | abuseThese are all so great. you really should continue. There's be a slow-down in fan fics and your's is one should continue |
| Lylirium 2008-07-13 ch 7, | abuseL-O-V-E-D it! |
| Palmer4President 2008-07-10 ch 7, | abuseAwesome! I still can't get over how you pour such vivid descriptions and emotions into such short pieces of writing. Absolutely fantastic! |
| Palmer4President 2008-07-07 ch 6, | abuseGreat job! I loved that last line that was in the parentheses. "She never really admitted to herself why she hated her old self, but deep down, and we're talking about really deep down, she did because the old Lily was so weak when it came to him." Just... wow, beautiful, and very, very Lily-like. |
| Palmer4President 2008-06-16 ch 5, | abuseI love it. Beautifully written, as always! Sad, heartbreaking, and oh-so emotional, but absolutely beautiful. |
| Palmer4President 2008-06-12 ch 4, | abuseAww, such a sad drabble. I liked it. Great job! |
| Palmer4President 2008-06-09 ch 3, | abuseWow, so sad, but so perfect for Lily. I always thought she would be happy for Serena, but also very, very upset on the inside that Serena and Dan were what she and Rufus should have been. I can't wait for the one from Rufus's point of view. |
| Palmer4President 2008-06-06 ch 2, | abuseI love these drabbles! You've got these characters down perfectly. I can't wait to read more, and I hope you plan to write more than drabbles because you're really good! |
| sugarrushed- 2008-06-06 ch 1, | abuseWE LOVE RUFUS AND LILY:D I LOVE YOU:D:D I WANT MOAR. WRITE MOAR (: YOU'RE AWESOME. |
| BananaXPancakes 2008-06-05 ch 1, | abuseVery good! Sad, but good. I love that song for them. Great job. :) |
| FashionIsLove 2008-06-04 ch 1, | abusethis is so sad. but it's good. :) |