I'm totally team Edward also. How could it not end up angsty and dark? Edward himself is angsty, dark, and very much depressed. He should believe in himself. He should believe that Bella would not, could not, truly love a monster, therefore, he cannot truly BE a monster!

Well done dear!

Pam

This is really good stuff, I absolutely loved it. Very edward - especially the first part. Congratulations.

LOVE IT! I would love to see you write Edward and Renee's first meeting. Please continue if you are so inclined.

okay so i read one fanfiction by you about edward and bella not knowing what this series was and because of it i went out and bought the first 3 books and read them in about 3 days haha. I love this series, I love your stories and I am totally Team Edward!

well that story was pretty much amazing. i can't even find words to describe it.

amazing.

Wow...hard to say how I feel about this piece. Don't get me wrong, I'm really blown away by it.

I think with Edward, the cadence of his speech has that signature antiquity but is also modern too. Maybe I'm just being picky but areas when you have Edward saying "I am..." when I believe him saying "I'm " would be appropriate bothered me a little. Overall, it's not the words, the whole thing should flow in any case right? I think less can mean more.

Ah, but you've got some great lines here. Too many to list.

Awesome work.

Hope I enjoyed it? Well, let there be no confusion; I VERY MUCH enjoyed it! )

I thought parts were a little caotic,(And don't say Edward is caotic, I know that.) And it made some of the sentences hard to follow. Do you have a beta? Thats the kind of problem a good beta can fix in a jiffy.

I have been following you for a long time, and I must say your Twilight fics show alot of growth and are very enjoyable reads.

Overall, this is one of the better fics I've read in a while; Don't stop, whatever you do!

-FAV!-

L. M.

As all your stories, how could I dislike that?

Twilight is my brand new obsession and you wrote everything I thought about that chapter.

Congratulations again, and always

wow. that was impressive. please post again and soon.