This is a really good story--twisted, just like Umbridge and Moody both were, only in different ways. I like this one a _lot_.

OMFG. what's gonna happen?

Yikes! Interesting. I don't normally read fanfic outside of Naruto, but it had your name on it so I had to wander over and take a gander:)

Quite enjoyable. It's interesting looking at Umbridge at this point, (possibly) before she has gone pure dag-nasty evil. It would seem that she's still at the 'kidding herself' stage, since she gauges Moody's paranoia and vigilance to be misplaced and that he's seeing things that aren't there, when obviously in retrospect he WAS seeing things clearly.

It was the link between eyeballs and mouth that was crazy.

Nice touch including her casual cruelty or at best contempt for everyone but herself, and her lust for the eye especially once she actually has it. The sort of thing that would appeal to a mind like hers, no doubt.

Thanks (and blegh!;)) for sharing!

Eep. The manner in which you have suggested Umbridge's incipient madness is particularly effective. Well told.

That was a creepily perfect Umbridge right there.