dude, i love you. sorry i didnt review before this, but i always had to flee the computer whenever family was around. XD

anyway, great ending, i'm off to read the sequel now. luvs.

This was a good ending...

Zane was pretty harsh with Sara, though...I suppose that's Zane when he's out of patience.

Syrus and Hassleberry...wow...it seems like something they would do, keeping Sara out like that. She might have actually made Jaden smile a little, as long as she didn't make fun of his hair.

I'm excited to read the sequel to this! I like how you weave Sara's story into the 'canon' story...it's really hard to do, and you make it look easy!

hey, anna, nice job! good chapter, tho yeah, you did kinda copy the ep. XD

luvs you much; update soon!

Yay, you finally updated.

I wonder, are you going to send Sara into the alternate dimension thing, because Zane is there? I think that'd be kind of hard considering there is not much humor in that part of the show.

I'm still cracking up from reading this.
JJ

XD I love Sara and Silpheed...they enjoy life...that's for sure.

Zane helped out! I loved how you described the way he felt when he found out he was dueling Jesse...you did an amazing job of describing his passion for dueling...it's very hard to do.

And of course...I adore the Missy-bashing...it's subtle, and she's still in character the entire time. And Zane really wishes she lived on the other side of the world.

And Aster was teasing him the entire time...definitely something he would do...but I personally like the nickname 'Ziti'.

I think that you're doing a great job staying in canon, and that this story is even better because of it. It flows with the series, but it has its own plot and surprises.

You did a great job describing the duel...especially Jesse's and Zane's reactions.

If I had any constructive criticism to give, I would...but I don't see anything wrong with this story AT ALL...all I can say is you're a gifted writer, and I can't wait to read more.

draca, i love you sometimes. XP

poor zane. his life is not fun. but it amuses me.

Zane: you hate me, don't you?

Alu: hell no, i love you. it's a strange world, kaiser; we fans are always amused when our faves are having a hard time in a funny way like this. XD

Zane: meh.

Alu: Update soon!

Zane: please don't...

Alu: shut up, zane.

Good job on this chapter...I love how you described the city at night. You do a great job of writing metaphors and similes.

This chapter had great humor, especially when Aster, Sara, and Missy went to Zane's apartment.

And Missy sniffing Zane's jacket...and her reaction to the scent...I think that that's something would actually do if she got the chance.

I loved how Aster called Zane 'Ziti' as they left his apartment.

I also like how Zane reacted to Aster's proposal to helping the school. He never lets himself look excited...or in pain, either.

And the shocker crown...at least Sara wasn't hurt...and they didn't have to use the frying pan.

Great chapter...I'm excited to read more!

This story is so funny, I kept on cracking up throughout the story. I love Sara, she is nowhere near a mary-sue, and she is rather embarassing, but that just makes it even funnier. Keep up the great work. ;)

another fantastic chapter, anna. luvs.

merry christmas! Zane says hi. XD

Another really good chapter! Sorry I haven't reviewed on this story recently...^^0

I love the way you write character interaction, like between Sheppard and Sara.

Missy torture is pretty fun too *insert evil laugh* Aster was pretty smart to back off...

So Zane was taken back to the hospital? It almost sounded like a kidnapping...hopefully they didn't find out about his heart condition.

Great writing, and I can't wait to see another chapter.

XD

Poor Sara! Poor LORENZO!! HE'S the one who got it the worst XD

This continues to be a marvelous story.

hmm...who could this mysterious person be...?

werecats are awesome. shoutout to solembum!

i had to do that. XD

update soon!

aww...poor lonely psychos...XD

it is true, you DON'T need money to screw the rules. XD.

on to the next chapter!

I like how the doctor's name is Noose... XD

This is a completely different setting for Sara, and it seems you really know her, for her reaction is what one would expect.

If there's something I've learned, you don't control the characters, the characters control you. I got that from a book, but it makes sense if you think about.

this should be good...i'm rather scared, honestly.

love you anna, update soon.