I love the story it is cool

This is really cute. I can so see Sarah like this. Jareth is a little bit dense... I'd be surprised if it took that much to get through to him - but with his distractions of the kingdom, Sarah's ire and his own beauty to gaze at in a mirror... perhaps. : ) Really enjoyed this. -Clare

LMFAO!

when i read the bit where jareth asks if shes got a 'bun in the oven' i nearly fell over laughing XD BRILLIANT! lawl.. he's soo stupid XD

anyways, this was a brilliantly amazingly awesomated story and i absalootlai adored it! J'ADORE! *ahem*

the preview at the botom sounds aweosme - but i don't know how long ago this story was written... so im not sure if my comment means anything to you or not :P

XxoxX

this was amazing. oh, poor jareth! she threw a frying pan at him? just priceless!

oh, and since i reviewed Mr. Owl before, i'll say it here: please do continue!

LOL!

For being the King of the Goblins, he sure is typically male! LOL! I loved it; it was so CUTE! I guess those pants of his aren't too tight after all! Bwahahahaha! XD BFODLOL! (Banging Fist On Desk LOL)

So great! Please continue to write the Adventures of Sarah and Mr. Owl! It looks dramatically cute!

*palms her face* oh God Jareth you are an embaracement to men everywhere!I can't believe that it took him soo long to figure it out and he couldn't even do that on his own he had to ask Hoggle. Do you think Jareth gets Hoggle's name wrong on purpose? She threw a FRYING PAN at him? wow remind me never to get pregnant if the mood swings are that bad... I am already and emotional person and could probably do some serious damage. Anywho I loved it was extremely amusing and may I just say you used you dramatic irony very well. GOOD JOB! ;)

Alanna

the story is good also! same with mr owl! i loved it. keep on writing and hope you'll continue the adventures of sarah and mr. wol...

This is really good, i really like it (: especialy when he doesn't know what the "Bun in the oven" is, You hve captured the comedy from the film really well x

That was great. I like how maucho he was while still being so tightly wrapped around her little finger. I love his commitment and how much he cares and how excited he is about the proof of their love. You did a great job of maintaining their characters, too. Great fic :)

aww! CUTE! ya know what they have to do now though...they have to break it to their families!*cackles*

I really think you should continue Mr. Owl...or w/e it's sequel is. I think I already reviewed Mr. Owl...

I loved this story and 'Mr Owl'! I'd definitely like to see it continued...Jareth as a father is such a funny thought though done quite often...

Keep Writing!

aww that was adorable even if Jareth is a little dense some times. Excellent work!

Aw... he's so dense! That was sweet and cute.

You have written a very nice and very cool chapter today. Have a groovy day tomorrow. Keep smiling. :-)

Please update your story.

Sarah was waiting for him to say something. Her big, jade eyes were staring at him unblinkingly. Thinking that she was anticipating a compliment, he said, “Nice stick.”

To his horror, it only drove her to more tears and she fled the room.

“Wait! Sarah? It was a really remarkable piece of stick. There’s nothing quite like it, truly,”

HAHAHA! Brilliant! Cute and funny! Excellent work, everything was spot on!