|Reviews for Hell Is Other Demons|
| Nightcrawlerlover 3/15/12 . chapter 1
Neat! I like it - especially these parts:
"Sheesh, you guys are so lame." Warren said, shaking his head. Glory, the Mayor and the Master glared at the young nerd. "I don't know why you guys are making such a big deal about Buffy! She's just a girl!"
"Oh like you could do better." Glory snarled.
"Hey, me and the Trio were the scourge of Sunnydale!" Warren said grandly.
"Interesting. How exactly did you fight the Slayer?" Adam asked.
"Get this, Frankenstein." Warren said, leaning on the table. "See, at first I was kinda into the same thing your mom was into: I made robots!"
"I am not a robot, I'm a kinematically redundant, biomechanical demoniod." Adam deadpanned.
"Whatever." Warren said, waving the comment aside. "Anyway, I was engaging in a mystical competition with two friends when suddenly, it occurred to me: become a super villain! So, the three of us started by hiring an M'Fashnik demon so we could rob a bank, cause, come on, you gotta have money if you want to carry out an evil operation!"
"I never did." Adam said.
"Me neither." Said the Master.
"Well, you do if you're human, OK?" Warren said exasperated. "Anyway, we got our act together and we started our plan against Buffy. First we spent the day messing with her. We made time speed up for her, sent demons after her and got her stuck in a time loop! Haha! Then there was this whole deal with my ex girlfriend and… well, there's no need to get into that.
"See, we finally got the orbs of Nezzla'khan and I got all super strong. It was so cool! I killed a demon without breaking a sweat! I got strength, ladies and money! I was inches away from pounding the Slayer into dust… until she smashed my orbs. Damn bitch. I got even with her, though! I got a gun and I shot the bitch right in her back yard! And if that stupid witch hadn't killed me, I would've finished the job! I would've killed that bitch like dog she is!"
"You need to watch your language, young man." The Mayor said sternly.
The bar faded away, and each of the fiends also faded from each other's sight. Their torment had begun anew. The Master found himself on the roof of Sunnydale High. Glory found herself in the construction site. Adam was in the Initiative's control room. Mayor Wilkins found himself at the graduation ceremony. Warren was running through the woods. Caleb was in the pagan temple. And Drusilla was in a cemetery in Rome. This was their eternal punishment.
Very awesome, as well as very well-written, too. :) (I fixed the misspelling of "away" for you, of course.)
Keep up your super-neat, very creative and phenomenally beautiful writing! :)
| LadyDM 9/9/11 . chapter 1
This is very well done.
| JimandArtie4ever 5/13/09 . chapter 1
A great story. Very good.
| Cardio Necrosis 4/19/09 . chapter 1
Holy shit! This is one of the best fics I've ever read, ever! I laughed through most of it-you have got all the bad guys down to a T! I loved the minions, they were hilarious! And I ADORE Drusilla! I never really thought about it, but she was right. Buffy took EVERYTHING from them.
It was hilarious, but kinda dark at the same time. Good job!
| The Master 6/13/08 . chapter 1
Cool look into the villains. Awesome story!
| DragonNerd 6/5/08 . chapter 1
I loved this look at the big bads.
| ShaneBLAST 6/4/08 . chapter 1
This was good!
| P-Money 6/4/08 . chapter 1
This was an idea that always fascinated me, all the bad guys talking about her then facing her again and again. Great writing.