Reviews for Remorse and Forgiveness

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Tanali 2008-08-06 ch 5,	abuseWow...amazing...you capture the exact feelings and personality of Zelos, and Sheena too. It's really great! I'm only reviewing because it's good...and...i want you to update. ^_^; well, don't give up, it's wonderful! you have a nack for writing.
CruxisCrystal 2008-07-16 ch 1,	abuseHello! You know I read "Meaning" ages ago when i was going through my whole writers block thing and i loved every single chapter you write them both so well. And this is just as brilliant! You are a fantastic writer and the funeral was written so well! Thank you for being so good at this :) And sorry for not reviewing before :)
Mikachiru 2008-07-15 ch 5,	abuseYah! Another chapter! I was hoping for a dream but the flashback was good too. :)I should really start on my Sheelos fic...Anyway, I'll be waiting for the next chapter! Your loyal fan-girl, Mikachiru
Mikachiru 2008-07-03 ch 4,	abuseSheena got rejected. I sympathize. Anyway, I think Zelos and Sheena talking to each other would be a good choice, along with Zelos having a dream because Sheena could comfort Zelos when (if) he starts to break down. But you could probably pull off any of them.
Mikachiru 2008-07-03 ch 3,	abuseTwo days ago, I saw the Flanoir scene. I thought Zelos mocking Lloyd was funny, despite the serious atmosphere. Zelos can't start cutting himself again because then everything that Sheena tried so hard for will go to waste! But your the author so...yeah. It's good so far. Keep going, please!
Mikachiru 2008-07-03 ch 2,	abuseAw, poor Zelos. I can't really offer any good advice since I'm a noob, but I think this is good as it is. Bring Sheelos back! >u
Mikachiru 2008-07-03 ch 1,	abuseA start of another angsty fic. Yah! ^^
Faux Promises 2008-07-03 ch 4,	abuseOnly two ways to fix this, sex or violence. Synthesis of both might work. Lmao, kidding. XD But yes, Sheena DOES need to do something quick, or he's gonna lose it again. I think whichever way to choose to take this would be cool with me! -FP
whiterose2406 2008-07-03 ch 4,	abuseI don't think this chapter sucks at all. It shows just about every emotion out there, and I think you wrote it all well. :) Once again, Zelos is being stubborn, and Sheena is matching it. She's got the patience of a saint if you ask me, though it's all still getting to her. But she promised to be there for Zelos, and she's so far stuck to her promise. As for Seles' funeral... I think either way a dream or a flashback will torture Zelos. A dream might be a bit more dramatic, if you want to take the story further down that path. Both could potentially open them up to a talk, and maybe some reaffirmation of their relationship. Whatever you do, I'm sure it'll be good. :)
Leaf Shinobi of Mizuho 2008-06-25 ch 3,	abuseAWESOME! Please review soon.
Cataclysmic Eclipse 2008-06-22 ch 3,	abuseAw, poor Zelos. That seems very...Zelos-like to me. He's keeping it all inside since he doesn't know how not to. That was a pretty nice chapter, I think you should be a bit more confident in your writing skills, you don't suck (don't worry^^). Can't wait 'til the next update.
whiterose2406 2008-06-20 ch 3,	abuseAw... Nice chapter Riku. ^_^ I know Zelos doesn't know how to express what he's feeling, but I hope that something will happen before he totally collapses again and start harming himself... :\ Sheena will figure something out. She loves him, so she will. She won't let him head down his destructive path again. I just spotted some errors here and there, so try to watch out for those. Update soon. :)
Faux Promises 2008-06-19 ch 3,	abuseAh, pobrecito! My dear little Zelos just never ceases to torture himself does he? Sheena's always in for more than she can handle with him. x3 Thanks for updating! ^^ -FP
Cataclysmic Eclipse 2008-06-16 ch 2,	abusePoor Zelos, poor Sheena too. This is nice, you've got the characters in character and some believable conflict. I feel bad for the both of them. You've got your own writing style down, too. If you're not pleased with the chapter, you don't have to rush things. Take your time so you're satisfied with it. A writer's satisfaction with a story is important, I'd say. But no worries, finals seem to suck all the inspiration away...hope you did okay, by the way.
whiterose2406 2008-06-15 ch 2,	abuseAww... Lovely chapter, Riku. :) Once again, I think you've nailed their characters and emotions well. Poor Zelos... ;_; Sheena's trying to get through to him, and again he's closing himself up. They're both so stubborn. :\ Keep going with this. ^_^

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