Wow I'm a bit late to reply, but its too amazing not too.I love the poetic writing style and just everything about. :)

That was oddly beautiful to read. One would think that Sasuke would leave her since she has no memories or at least attempt to retrieve them. Instead, he weaves a new life for her and him and it oddly seems to make sense.

this was so sweet :)

Aww, sounded very poetic and stuff. Wait, does this mean that Sasuke is the farmer? I don't understand that part... but I liked it anyway! _

Cool. I didn't really get it, but this was just the first chapter after all. I hope you update soon!

Awe... so achingly sweet. :))

You're very poetic :D I love this story _

Beautiful and bittersweet. Great job!

Ah, wonderful. At first I thought it was just a sort of poetic, theoretical prose - and that was lovely... But then I got to the end - and bam! The cincher! The fact that he took her from her destroyed home and she doesn't even remember to hate him. And now they live together, ah. Wonderfully spiteful, and painfully sweet.

The line that made me squee the most was "Maybe you should start building for more" (SQUE, so paternal and just warm and fuzziness!). Wonderfully penned as always, Mafia. _ (And did I get first review on the clean sweep, all three? GO ME!)