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| Robin Silverman 2008-09-01 ch 7, | abuseplease keep going with this and is tony and steve really going out in the comics? i can't get any where i live so i don't h\know. |
| wiremanlookswest 2008-07-13 ch 5, | abuseAwesome. As always. You saved my day. |
| Cat 2 2008-07-08 ch 7, | abusebrilliant. Just one minor point as a major C.S. Lewis fan I have to make. The quote in question comes from the last battle (I am 99.9% sure that it is not the Horse and his boy), and as a Sci-fi fan, I like the last battle. the bit was Aslan and Tash is really cool. Write another story soon! |
| WickedGlamour 2008-06-30 ch 6, | abuseAbso-**-lutely flawless. Loved it from start to finish, as I have all the fics in this series. The clarity and attention to detail is just astounding. Props! I vote for another one now, a follow up to this one. The Steve/Tony angst/fluff is just so damn addicting... =D Emily |
| ophiaguin 2008-06-25 ch 5, anon. | abuse:'c Aww. Makes me want to cry. Brilliant chapter once again. I can't wait for the next one. |
| WickedGlamour 2008-06-25 ch 5, | abuseHoly shitcakes. Just, damn. Tony and Steve and Don and ** Peter Parker...I feel so bad for all of them! This fic is amazing. I get anxious waiting for the next update! Man-o-man, update asap. I'm addicted to this fic! =D Emily |
| alescA Munroe 2008-06-22 ch 5, | abuse"I was not a horrible leader." "Okay, not horrible. Just annoying." Good chapter, again. Much love for your Rhodey, by the way. |
| Michael Weyer 2008-06-19 ch 4, | abuseGREAT chapter! I take it Peter's "sell my soul" line was you joining in the fanfic writers slamming "One More Day" which was deserved. Thor's return was interesting, love to see him talking to Cap and I liked that little reference at the end. Great work, keep it up. |
| Cat 2 2008-06-19 ch 4, | abuseexcellent as ever. keep this up. |
| alescA Munroe 2008-06-18 ch 4, | abuse"I have a very large stick. Let go of me, or I will hit you with it." Best. Line. EVER. |
| IronAmerica 2008-06-18 ch 4, | abuseTHOR'S BACK! Finally! I love Thor. Almost, but not quite as much as I love Cap. Anyways, I can't wait to see everyone's reactions to Thor's return, if and when they see him. It is inevitable, unless you go and wipe him off the face of the Earth, and Nordrassil somehow. Keep the updates coming! -IronAmerica |
| ophiaguin 2008-06-16 ch 3, anon. | abuseGreat work, as usual! Thank you for updating~ I worry about Tony. Please continue soon. I'll be on watch. c: |
| IronAmerica 2008-06-15 ch 3, | abuseFINALLY! Okay, it hasn't been that long since the last update, but I've been looking for one every day. Oh, and, it's probably not your fault, but the line spacers in this chapter, if there were supposed to be any, were missing again. Good chapter all the same, and I look forward to more of this wonderful installment of this particular universe. -IronAmerica |
| Cat 2 2008-06-15 ch 3, | abuseaah! excellent chapter. Clint's relationship with Jan is a little worrying, but still all great for the story. keep this up. |
| alescA Munroe 2008-06-14 ch 3, | abuseTony didn't change his armor codes? How sloppy of him. ^^ Excellent work, as per usual. I like how you write Clint. Sam's kinda great, too. |