i literally nearly almost started bawling when i read this. pls continue. u hav great potential as an author

please continue the story!
add at leat one more chapter please!

hn

In a word... damn.
I liked it so far.

OHMYGOSH! NU! you can't do that! it was the best fanfic i've everr read! like seriously! ohmygosh. aah! O:

it's okay though. i understand...-_-

NO IM GOING TO SHOOT YOU :[

D: well, this is...unfortunate...

hope you uh, continue (?)

but thanks for all the effort, and just kicks, this is an awesome story XD

Aw. :( I hope you'll continue this some other time T__T

I'll fill you in on some mark stuff:

The mark is still active even after Oro's death... Although that may be because Oro was somewhat incorporated into Sasuke's body. So, you having Sasuke suffer from it in this chapter is fine (AND awesome btw). Itachi is the one who removes it completely, but I'm sure you've already read about that little skirmish :D I won't spoil the rest if you haven't.

Very little mention of Itachi, which is a little surprising but it cuts down on SasuAngst, always a good thing. I can picture him giving Sasuke tips ('All Uchihas are ukes, foolish little brother. Now, if you want to make him beg, you need to wear this and this and...'), and being all meddling xD

(Also, in canon, Manga!Sakura (the scene was removed from the anime ;-;) is a diehard yaoi fangirl. She ships SasuSai. No, really. I thought it was hilarious xD)

I really do love this story though; one of the very rare SasuGaa fics that have an ongoing storyline past the sex scene (which was hot). Not to mention that it's nice and long too

I love this story! It is awesome. Hurry up and reveiw!

UPDATE SOON! OR I WILL KILL A WAFFLE MYSELF! SO CONSIDER A WAFFLES LIFE AND UPDATE SOON!

Hurry up and up date! This story is awesome!One of the best i have ever read!! and i have read a lot of fanfiction!

O.M.G... I love this fanfiction!It is perfect in every single way! Exept that I would like to see more of Gaara's pov (i love gaara). Hey i have a suggestion for the story... I think it would be cool if Gaara gets a bad sicknes on the way back to the sand village and sasuke gets all freaked out and stuff... well you can use it or not use it i dont really care , just thought it was a good idea... wow now im rambling...(SOCKZ ARE AWESOME!)

Please update soon!CLIFFIES ARE MEAN!

Spottedstar106

Actually I think the whole active curse mark thing just makes this story more interesting. Oh, and this chapter was really good. I didn't expect the active curse mark which is one reason why I like it, cause I wasn't expecting it.

UPDATE SOON!