omg i loved this it was such a deep ad compelling story with just the right amount of romantic infulance to make me happ it was a hell of alot better than anything i wrote great job

-Raven Fireheart

Amazing! I love it, especially the last part. "I guess, in the end, why the hell do I even care what they think?" < Best line!

Aw...

So cute.

You go Jimmy!

Brilliant! i love how in both of these stories you refer to the colours of thier eyes

Great ending!

LOL, leave it to Jimmy to be incredibly articulate until something romantic is being discussed, then to suddenly sound like a blushing ten year old.

This is great. I really like Jimmy's perspective on their relationship; it's the perfect compliment to "simplification".

aw that was so sweet!
awsome job

hi, i read ur story..hehe good one...well at least u kept mostly the characters as in the show...

YAY! I loved that story! Write more! It would make me smile like this one did! GREAT JOB!

Aw, I liked it! It was very well written and I think you were good at achieving Jimmy's voice.


Hopefully you will be writing more fics in the future as you're a great writer.

Very good story! You have Jimmy's POV perfectly done.

Keep the good writing.

You know what? I LOVE BOTH OF YOUR STORIES. I hope to see more of your stories soon. It makes me happy! :)